|Reviews for The Master of Discipline|
| jaredhimself31 9/9/09 . chapter 23
The important question this chapter raises, is how exactly do you get rid of a maniac like Karasuba? I know that's the obvious conclusion, but it's really got me chapter.
| IcedFox 9/9/09 . chapter 23
Karasuba's pretty insane I do hope that you know only the way stop this her death because love doesn't her character. It's like sasuke dating sakura it wouldn't go but, some people make it believable. Anyway I'd like to see this end and a good way. good job.
| Dominikku-kun 9/9/09 . chapter 23
I've said it before, and I'll say it again. She. Is. Lucy.
She's going to die, and he's going to be the one who has to kill her. No one else can do it.
| The PhantomHokage 9/9/09 . chapter 23
Nice chapter I knew she wouldn't kill him but I do wonder how he will stop her doesn't sound easy I think only number one has a chance against her and that's if he doesn't kiss her before the two fight
| Eclipse1234 9/9/09 . chapter 23
awe, the chapters ubershort. oh well, its a lot better than nothing
| Hakkyou no Yami 9/9/09 . chapter 23
man Minato is sure lucky, though stopping Karasuba black heart and bloodlusted insane mind is going to be one of the toughest ever in Minato's life, so let's how he's gonne do it.
| MizoreShirayukiFan 9/9/09 . chapter 23
Wow, defeating the Black Sekirei. Thats a mighty high goal you set up for Minato. But as with all your stories, I'm sure he will pull it off in an amazing fashion.
| DMacIntosh 9/9/09 . chapter 23
a short chapter but good none the less.
and as for karasuba all i can say is holy shit!
update soon dude
| aondehafka 9/9/09 . chapter 23
It disturbs me to see that the category for the story switched from Drama/Humor to Drama/Tragedy. Hopefully that's more in reference to what's already happened (forced wingings and deaths of so many sekirei) than how the story will end.
| weixuan18 9/9/09 . chapter 23
Hm, question is how though.
| Avarenda 9/9/09 . chapter 23
It seems impossible to stop Karasuba...I think Minato is going to have to have a little talk with Miya. otherwise everyone is screwed.
| piercing kage kitsune 9/9/09 . chapter 23
i wonder what will happen.
| Mike 9/9/09 . chapter 23
Wow! Karasuba is more insane than I thought. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Brian Boru 9/9/09 . chapter 23
So she's more then an axe-crazy lunatic, she also has megalomaniac ambitions and eugenics on the back burner.
Two words- HOLY SH!#!
| Kazuki Shikimori 9/9/09 . chapter 23
Man, I wonder if we'll ever find out WHY Karasuba is the way she is...bad adjustments? Born that way? Bad past experiences? Something? Maybe someway for Minato to get through to her and change her? I certainly wouldn't want him to be forced to kill her somehow or anything.