Lovely job. Very in depth and detailed. I love how deep you go with some things, and yet leave other things just vague enough to let us imagine more. I adore your writing! Excellent fic. :D

Red

From one Pike fangirl to another, I love these stories. And you have a great eye for Trek trivia-including Dehner was great :).

Very nice. Deft hand with characterization and inventive touch with often over-looked details as always. You never disappoint.

Thanks for posting.

-Ellie

This was very well done. I have to admit to having very little interest in Chris Pike or Number One until some great writers came along to show me their potential. I hope this is a beginning and not a one-shot but in any case, thanks! :-)

I was just wondering when the next story was coming...and here it is.

Lovely as always, better if they'd been together...if you know what I mean!

Can they be together next time? Please, please?

Jen