This is a pleasant change from all the "ZOMGLIGHTISEVILINCARNATE" stories.

nice idea:) I sort of like how it portrays Raito as a nicer guy than he was... more of a martyr than a murderer.

Please update soon!

Nicely done.

so beautiful...:'( was a really good fic!:)

I've always thought it was strangely inappropriate for Light to die in the middle of the staircase even though i didn't approve of him. The fact that he fought his way to the top really portrays his stubborn character and his state of perfection. I was hoping for the glimpse of L in the end though - but i like this =)

there's a little error that you did: ["...But once your reach the top…”]
you added an 'r' to 'you'. Just wanted to let you know =)

Thanks for this story! I'd love to see more of your other fics too (nudge nudge hahhaha)

Nice drabble, but completely OC.
4/5