I feel really sorry for Melinoe. It not her fault on the circumstances of how she was conceived. I can't believe they are going to torment and abuse her just because she was born from rape and that she looks different from the regular goddess. You can't blame an innocent baby for what has happened. It is making me dislike Hades, Persephone, and the others. I wonder what Hercules reaction will be when he finds out he has a half sister. Poor Melinoe she is going to become a sadistic murdering goddess because her mother and the others won't treat her fairly. I hope you will make them be sorry for how Melinoe turns out to be. Please please please update. I want to read more. Update soon :)

I can't believe Zeus did that. But thats how the myth goes. I wonder if you will have Zagreus make an appearance because he is also another "lovechild" of Zeus and Persephone.

really good plot but plz update it already

Ew! Zeus slept with Seph, his daughter!

Update!

I love this story and the myth but you know what makes it gross. I mean really gross as in seeing really old people doing 'IT'... Zeus, in greek mythology, Is her dad! ...I just puker a little in my mouth... -_- But amazing story!

I love this! Love how you kept Melinoe's features too :D

but pleeeeease don't forget about little miss flames and flowers!

Wow, I was riveted to the story. I love when Hades hair starts to turn orange. Another thumbs up.

oh my god! That is so awful! 0 Did you know that that's how the mortal girl got pregant with Heracles in greek myth as well? Zeus possed as her husband and took advantage of her. Sometimes Zeus just makes me sick!

I really hope you do continue with this though because its a very interesting and plausible topic.

This actually shows what kind of person Zeus is. A man-whore. lol. Im perverted, so I automatically like it

yay another story )

got my attention D but i'm waiting for the other fanfic first

well thnx again & write on (dude)

oh yeah u may write another thousand stories, rlly love the stories including hades 3

well thnx hope you update those stories soon

WHY THAT NO GOOD SLIME RAT *long tone blocks out rest of sentence* I OUGHTA *another long tone*

Excited to read the rest, babe. See you soon. *hugs*

Excellent chapter! I wonder how Hades will react to this!