This is a very cool start to what seems like a great story. You definitely captivated me with this chapter and I'm looking forward to more. I found myself a little lost, but this is not a bad thing. It seemed like that was on purpose and that more will be revealed as we go on. Looking forward to it.

Wow. That was... wow. Truly excellent. One of the best fics i've ever read. Again, excellent work.

Awesome!

Wow, wonderful! Can't wait for more.