A really nice story. I think it's quite nice as a short story, but of course if you were to make it part of a longer fic I would have no objections :)

Very touching, I actually want to see this develop into a longer fic :)

are there other salvageable parts? because this was quite nice.

A beautiful fic.

great job with this!

I really liked this and would have loved to have seen the whole fic! Thanks for sharing this snippet with us.