I really like the relationship with Neji and Shikamaru, and how Shikamaru accidently told him the reason they were at the park XDDD

"It's all very exciting, until the volleyball hits Temari in the head. I laugh as Temari throws it as hard as she can into TenTen's stomach, and the two begin to argue as Ino pretends to pole dance against the side of the net." HAHAHAHA! Ino's hilarious XDDD

Sweet, humorous, and fluffy, your story is all of these things. I enjoyed it very much. It was so cute ad funny! I enjoyed every bit of it. Thanks for the great read!

Write on,

Nico

...hee.

I love this pairing. Shamelessly.

Nice story!

It was really sweet!

AHHH I had a fan moment for this chapter. SOOO cute. I love this couple so much! Ah! Their connection is just so amusing! GREAT JOB! I LOOOVE you for writing these types of stories, they're so well written! Again, fantastic job and I like the way you bolded their names at the beginning of each chapter, it looked very nice. Your writing style is very creative and clean-looking, unlike others'. Keep on writing, I'll never get enough! ;)

You stick admirably closely to the true personalities of the characters, and I LOVE that! Ino made me laugh in this one, and Chouji's way of telling Shikamaru to spill his heart out to Temari was definitely funny. A great author, a great chapter; I'll never get sick of your stories!

I should be studying, but I had to finish this one too!

Shikamaru and Temari are not quite the fluffy couple (people say, I disagree), you make them so naturally cute!

I'm tired of that cliché fic with plots like they're too proud - fight - make out- Temari leaves. Thanks for being different!

I mean, if they like each other, why not getting together and show they care? I love it!

Gosh, i freaking love this story. I cried while reading the last chp, yeah i'm a sucker for sappy love stories. I really like your style and the way you make everything seem so innocent, i pretty ironic in a way. Thanks for posting this. Like it tons.

I suppose that I haven't yet told you that, but you are the only reason to my ShikaTema addiction, because I didn't believe in that pair until I read your fanfics, and got totally captivated :)

Congrats you seem to be the only person capable of doing this :D

Good luck!

BR.

GREAT

I love the description of the room in chapter 1. And when Shikamaru said Temari's cat was "after him"! great story! 3rd chapter was my favorite

Love it!

Hey Mara,

Wow! This was utterly sweet! Loved the reference you made with regard to the title, and that you stuck to that theme throughout the story.

Interesting to see Temari act tough and yet relent, just for him. Loved your approach with regard to this fict, and how each of them was related, connected, and yet separate. Liked that even when using common, daily activities like meals, and having it take place within a day, the pace hardly seemed rushed.

Appreciated the language and the perspective, since it seemed to reflect the fact that Shikamaru seems to live up to his reputation as a genius. Nice that it was Ino who set this all up for Shikamaru, and held through to her end of her deal. Adored the childishness of both Shikamaru and Temari, and their honesty, finally.

Really sweet; this is! Thanks for writing it, Mara!

Shadow

The confession was obviously well-thought-out, and it turned out very sweet. And I loved the idea of Shikamaru going to sleep where he woke up that morning, and how it ties into the story's whole theme of "What goes around comes around.", it was a very clever touch. I've already said what I've needed to say about the rushing but even so the story was full of personality and fun. Good job, Mara!

- Steffie

aw! i luv it! it's so sweet, the confession made me squeal! and you know that i love me some shikatema, darling.

- PiLa

your dog is sniffing my foot. anyways i loved the whole thing. i know what steffie meant by the rushing. it was kinda rushed. but it was good. i guess you just need an editor. but i know how much you hate beta readers so okay whatever. i love you so much and the story was definitely sweet.

- DAISY

I've decided to review anyways, but please excuse my short temper, I have a terrible headache, as Pila has already said. I can see you rushed this. You need to slow down, Mara, you'll make a hundred and one mistakes if you don't take things at the safest rate. I know this was supposed to be posted before your summer ended, for sentimental reasons of your own, but it's alright to be late sometimes. Other than that, the plot is very cute. :)

- Steffie

lol, tenten is so funny! i love temari & tentens friendly ricvalry!

- PiLa

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asdjthsg! yeah...

- DAISY