Aw, this is really cute. I was thinking about the same thing the other day. It's cool that you wrote about it. I thought you did a good job with Cloud. Especially with the ending sentence being somewhat depressing. Ha, ha, what would Cloud be without some sad memories. I thought your narration was entertaining. I liked the statement, ". . . Zack Fair, had suffered trying to save Cloud's sorry ass" Lol, who hasn't thought that ;) I also liked how you pointed out that Aerith, and Zack were two of the most important people in his life, and that he feared Sephiroth coming back. I liked this _ I'm also writing a Zack, and Cloud fic ;) I love that friendship pairing _

Happy Birthday Cloouud! :D

Aw this is such a sweet story. "Zack the Puppy"! XD