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TheMostPatheticNameEver
2009-11-19 . chapter 1
Ooh. Nice. I do wonder though, did Roxas really not get what was going on when he caught Reno and Axel "talking"? Or did he just pretend not to?
Anyway, I'm really glad I found this, it's amazing, and I'm looking forward to a (hopfully) soon-ish update.

Love,
Pathetic
Quarried Times
2009-08-31 . chapter 1
Oh wow this is so good! More more please! I need to know what happens next :O
toastyoats
2009-08-29 . chapter 1
num, my salivary glands need a fucking break.
seriously.
my poor keyboard too. :/

yummy, i am such a fan of akurokuno like you wouldn't believe. and you just made it so sexy. also, crossdressin' roxas is like fucking buttered toast on a hot naked gay man.
you're really a wonderful writer, you make writing emotions (so much harder than it seems) seem so effortless and it's so easy to relate to. for that i admire you tremendously.

except urgh, you have to promise me that it'll end up akuroku because gosh i hate it when reno wins. probably because my heart is sold to akuroku and always will be forevernever.

looking forward to an update! :)

LOVE~
Naive-Symphony
2009-08-27 . chapter 1
hahahaha oh man i loved this. is there gonna be more? i can't wait. :)
Atomic-Clover
2009-08-22 . chapter 1
OH GOD MICHELE, OH HOLY BALLS OF GLORY, THIS THIS IS ABSOULTELY A M A Z I N G SO FAR!! I CANN'T /WAIT/ FOR THE NEXT PART! OMGOMGOMG THIS IS SO GOOD! I LOVE IT SO FREAKING MUCH, BA-A-A-A-A-A-AHG!! -rolls around-

OM MY, WHERE TO START??

ok, firstly, i ADORE how you are writing these guys, AHG YOU'RE INCREDIBLE! i LOVE how you describe and narrate axel's contradictory feelings and reasoning and turmoil, and how Reno is so /clearly/ irrisistable, and it is so so impossible to resist his seduction x3
baw, and Roxas! ahg!! i dont know, maybe its just cause i know you and know how you like your roxas, but even tho roxas didnt have much screen time or anything, i got a very clear sense of his personality, like, he's a gentler guy, but can still get really sarcastic and feisty, but overall SO ADORABLE, BA-A-AHG! IF IT WASN'T SO HOT, I WOULD NEVER WANT TO SEE RENO WITH HIM, EVER. HE DOESNT DESERVE SUCH PERFECTION D< aw and Axel! how he clearly loves Roxas so much, it's so heart warming and beautiful, AW I LOVE THEM SO MUCH, YOU WRITE THEM SO INCREDIBLY WELL M'LOVE!! -starry eyes-
oh. and reno. oh lordy lordy, reno *_* BAH JUST YOUR NARRATIVE IS DRIPPING OF SEXINESS AND DROOL. FUCK, RENO'S HOT omfg and i absolutely LOVE reno/axel molestation time, NGH! SO FUCKING HOT, GAH I LOVE THAT... RELUCTANT SUBMISSION, THAT WHOLE 'GRR YOUR TOO HARD TO RESIST' THING, AND RENO'S SMIRK HAPPY AMUSEMENT CAUSE HE ALWAYS WINS, AND HE KNOWS IT. AND AXEL IS ALL... NNGGHH! FAJSLJFASLFKDJALSFDKJ
do you know what i mean? lmfao
BAW I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART, GAH, MICHELE, YOU BIG POOPY TEASE! I NEED IT! BAAW!! omg are axel and roxas gonna have their whole DESPERATE/CONFESSION-TIME SEX IN RENO'S BED?!? C8 CAUSE I CAN TOTALLY DIG THAT. LIKE, NAO PLZ.
mngah! this is so good michele. THIS IS SO FUCKING WELL WRITTEN!! baw Erin must be so happy, to have such an amazingly well written story! BAW I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT SO MUCH! I CANT WAIT FOR MORE~!! -blushingplzface-
Forced Smile
2009-08-21 . chapter 1
I can't believe I forgot to review this ashgalsas

My gosh, you write Reno so sexy and awesome D| I totally feel like he's a jerk, but he's so sexy I kinda forget... m...

And Roxas is ashalhsa adorable. He's seriously the Roxas we know and love, but his little anger phases and pouty moods are sweet. And him in lingerie. How did you manage to write ARR, crossdressing, and sweet fluffy moments all in one story, you awesome wizard??

Generic SAAJDADHFSDJSSJS CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER here, but with /feeling/. <3
OnceUponALullaby
2009-08-20 . chapter 1
Hey, Bell! It's me~ that-person-from-lj. LOLZ.

AS;LKDNFSLD THE WAY YOU WRITE THIS TOTALLY MAKES ME WANT AXEL TO BE WITH BOTH. (I feel like a threesome their apartment, mhmm.)

I don't like Reno because he's a lying bastard, but at the same time... *drools*

CAN'T WAIT FOR YOU TO POST THE NEXT PART! <3
My Chemical Naruto Romance
2009-08-18 . chapter 1
This is my first time actually reading ARR, and although I'm more of a just AR fan rather than Reno included, I gotta say.. I love this so much. You write Reno and Axel so well!

Can't wait for more. ^^
Clear Rain Drops
2009-08-17 . chapter 1
Oh mah GAH. YES.

ILU.
kusuri
2009-08-17 . chapter 1
Pure awesome and delisciousness. And I'm not even talikng about the trio! This is halarious and the imagery is so well done. I can't wait for the rest <3
constant boredom
2009-08-16 . chapter 1
So many questions left unanswered!! I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope roxas makes a move when they hang out xD
Roxas In My Pocket
2009-08-15 . chapter 1
this is rly good~ just saying!

i have slowly begun to like the paring of Axel and Reno... but its difficult because i love akuroku so much i sort of hate axel wanting or being with ANYONE besides roxas XD but its soo hot when he's with Reno DX

also, just wanted to check to make sure it was ok, i sort of wanted to draw Roxas in the little outfit Reno got him, cause it would be incredibly sexy.. so i just wanna make sure thats ok~

i will credit you and send u a link when im done and stuff~

great fic, and i cant wait for the next chapter~~!!
b4k4 ch4n
2009-08-11 . chapter 1
Wow, talk about a tough situation. The boy he's in love with dating the man he's attracted to. When I first saw Roxas open the door, I was like "Oh damn...I can't believe it..."

Yeah, ARR is a good read but my inner AkuRoku demands that no matter what happens, it must end with AkuRoku! *shakes pitchfork* Just kidding.
Haha, I think Nijunni is converting a LOT of people to the ARR love.

As bad as I feel for seeing Axel like this, it's fun reading how hopelessly in love he is xD For some reason, I really enjoy reading stories where relationships start off as one-sided and eventually becoming mutual. Or at least appears to be one-sided =)

I love your stories xD It's always so well written! I'm glad that uruwashii uso managed to convince you to post it up because it's really good! Keep it up! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Kive
2009-08-11 . chapter 1
Oh god ...
I remember when when I saw first saw ARR on Nijuuni's DA of course xD she's soo amazing and.. I started liking it as well-after a while that is.

Haha I have to say, vulnerable Axel is gotta be the best thing, but I feel I LITTLE bad that Axel isn't with Roxas even if I like the three as pairing *cough* justasthreesomethough *cough* because... I think I'm just perverted ._. I don't know I guess I'm really used to AkuRoku, but still I like it.

Anyway that was pretty amazing and oh-so-hot, there's not many ARR out there, or maybe I just don't know where to look D:
Yaoi.Loving.Jew
2009-08-11 . chapter 1
Oh my gosh! I need more cuteness! I'm excited for their little "hanging out and catching up" date.

And Roxas in that outfit... the way you wrote Axel's lusty feelings was so hot! Awesome job!
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