Reviews for Special Delivery
Takara yume 3/15/12 . chapter 2
Awwww ahhh why did it have to end so soon? ;w; anyways great story!
Takara yume 3/15/12 . chapter 1
*q* awesome plot and love how things are going so far XDD
That Panda You Know 2/21/12 . chapter 2
Hahaha XD. This story was too hilarious.
NX-Loveless-XN 2/18/11 . chapter 2
Wow. What a compromise! But a good one.
numb-butt 1/30/11 . chapter 2
I absolutely loved this and I find that it's probably one of the best things i've ever read, it just all comes together so well and that's a rare thing to come by sometimes (well, at least when I read things, anyways). Heheh, would've loved to have seen Demyx's reaction to everything, really. Then again, it might've taken away from this?

So glad I found this. I loved every second of reading it.

:D
KnightlyLady 11/11/10 . chapter 2
... I can't believe this only has 26 reviews -_-

I loved how incredibly well you developed everything in such a short amount of time! I mean, you only actually wrote, what, three or four days? And in that time, you managed to create incredibly clear characterizations, and all the tension was...tense, and all of the conflict was totally believable and not at all rushed. And all of the Axel-molestation, lol. Gotta love a molested Axel. And the dialogue... It was a really awesome story.

And then the ending. Bahaha, the ending. But that is the pervy Reno we all love, right? And all the chemistry was there, and-it was perfect XDD The only part I really had issues with was the, "Hey, Roxy, heh, why don't you try this lingerie on? Oh, it's just for shits and giggles, you know?" It seemed a little... I don't know. Roxas didn't really have a good reason to put it on? I mean, he could've just gotten rid of it himself, right? Although, looking back now, it's entirely possible that Roxas *wanted* to wear the lingerie for Axel, so... Maybe. (I thought that that was what Axel had brought in the box for a minute, LOL). BUT. Other than that, this was wonderful :) I'll definitely be off to check out your other stuff.

AND AXEL HAS A HAMSTER NAMED MICKEY. I absolutely loved that opening scene. And the whole premise. Gah, it was just wonderful. I'm sorry you're not happy with it, but... I certainly am XDD I'm super curious as to what you wanted to happen with it, lol. Anyway. HOORAY FOR AWESOME-NESS, WHICH THIS STORY MOST CERTAINLY IS.
poisonapple88 8/9/10 . chapter 2
Reno is always the pervert. I'm happy for Roxas and Axel! Cute story and well written. I'd like t know what ever happened to Demyx though!
constant boredom 8/5/10 . chapter 2
I expected something surprising from Reno but wow, did not see that coming. In hindsight, it's kind of obvious with how Reno naturally is, but while reading it I wasn't exactly thinking straight, more caught up in the writing and awesome story line :) I love this ending so damn much. It's modest and raw at the same time, and that takes talent to pull of.

It felt slightly rushed at parts, but I never would have guessed you had writer's block from reading it. It flowed together really nicely. I'm interested to see how you would change it because the way it is now is already awesome. (however if you planned on making it a tad more ... raunchy, as it were, I'm sure nobody would complain) D

I missed this story like crazy, thank you SO much for updating it! And thank your friend Atomic-Clover for me for getting you to upload it!
Yaoi.Loving.Jew 7/25/10 . chapter 2
Well that was a pretty cute ending. It left me with a fuzzy feeling inside. Good job!
Sonnenfinsternis 7/23/10 . chapter 2
I was somewhat surprised about Reno's reaction... but he IS Reno after all so I could have guessed.

But in the end, Axel is happy, Roxas is happy and Reno will be happy soon when he spread the happiness in other people's pants.

Loved this story :D
DivineSoul 7/19/10 . chapter 1
This was funny and I reallly like it. You should add to it!
Sonnenfinsternis 6/29/10 . chapter 1
I loved it.

You write Reno so sexy. He's very sure of himself. Poor Axel doesn't know what he's got himself into.

Haha, I hope Axel and Roxas meet in Reno's apartment and make out and then Reno's coming home early. He would totally want join them XD

And then they can have a super sexy threesome :D

Can't wait for the next part!
Stopped.Writing 2/24/10 . chapter 1
Dude, you so totally have to update. Like, now XD

This is awesome, and I'd really like to read more of this story :D
Azurela 1/17/10 . chapter 1
I feel really sorry for Axel in this. ):

And Reno's such a jerk! I hope Roxas finds out the truth/ that his 'boyfriend's' been hitting on his best friend. Etc etc.

Nice first chapter. I like where you're going with this

Update soon? Thanks!
TheMostPatheticNameEver 11/19/09 . chapter 1
Ooh. Nice. I do wonder though, did Roxas really not get what was going on when he caught Reno and Axel "talking"? Or did he just pretend not to?

Anyway, I'm really glad I found this, it's amazing, and I'm looking forward to a (hopfully) soon-ish update.

Love,

Pathetic
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