wow. that's a really poweful story. i have read most of your star wars stories and i like them. i have noticed that you change details from one story to another, except the RtB ones. like in this one, Obi has his own quarters. in all other ones, he and Qui share an apartment. just thought i'd point that out.

Very Very Nice Dude!

omg im crying! that was so sad! why did ya hav 2 write that? ah well it was very good. well done

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Anyway, excellent story, very well written. I enjoyed particularly reading about Obi Wan's freindship with Adelia,it seemed very realistic and your Qui Gon in this story, and your obi0wan for that matter were both well written in character.

Once again excellent job

Namarie

Mear!

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quite sad, but very good. seemed quite in-character with the jedi apprentice books.

*reaches for a box of tissues* very sweet! really sad, but i absolutly loved it! Gui-Gon finally opens up! Ah! beautiful!

All I can say is Wow, that was awsome, one of the best i've ever read.

A very touching story...very well written. Well Done.

Poor Obi! This was such a good story! I'm gonna read the rest of your stuff now. May the Force be with you.