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LamiaJade
2009-11-03 . chapter 1
"Bobby knows a guy, and the guy gives Dean some pills, and after that Dean just spoons a hot water bottle, melds with Bobby's couch."

*wants to be the couch... or the hot water bottle* XD

"Pressure against his bandage; a hand on his brow.
"He's hot, Bobby.""

GUH! God, yeah! *sighs happily* Honey, you making my day!! ^^
Love it!!
*huggles you*
Mary
Swellison
2009-08-22 . chapter 1
Hi Mad Server,
Oh, I love everything about this, from the masterful pause in the description ("Dean...helps) to the last word, "Car." I love that Dean is out of it, yet still in the middle of all the 'action.' And that you describe Sam's three long strides, so that I can hear them as I'm visualizing this scene. The last word, does that mean they're heading for the ER and maybe a scene continuation in the next drabble, I hope?
Awesome job!
Sue
Mahtalie
2009-08-21 . chapter 1
Oh I love this one so much! Definitely going in the favorite file :) I always love an appearance by Bobby, and you *know* I love me a sniffly!Dean - the opening line was brilliant. You created such a cozy scene - they've been hunting, they've been hurt and in danger, but everything is ok now because they're warm and safe, Sam's watching Dean, I imagine Bobby watching them both. I think it's raining too...maybe a fire going strong. Yeah... reminds me of being home sick as little kid, hearing mom in the kitchen making cookies, cuz you're going to feel better soon and treats always help :) Love me a drowsy!snuggly!sniffly!Dean - as always, perfect little drabble!
Tribble Master
2009-08-20 . chapter 1
i LOVE the first sentance. Bobby knows a guy... I bet he DOES. hehehe. bobby's amazing, he actually has a SYSTEM for all thos books? LOL! WRITE ON!
Micaiah
2009-08-20 . chapter 1
Aw, Dean. I love how Bobby and Sam are working but keeping an eye on Dean at the same time. For some reason I really want to be a hot water bottle now. :)
Spontaneity
2009-08-20 . chapter 1
Aw... poor Dean. Very nicely done!

"Cannibal books where you cook?" haha!
LivingForTv
2009-08-20 . chapter 1
This was very, very good! I liked the different actions going on and I loved the first sentence and the joke about cannibal books. Bobby is one tough cookie. Probably a whole jar, come to think of it:-)
Onyx Moonbeam
2009-08-20 . chapter 1
I love Sam continuing to work, but surrounding Dean in the sounds of his presence. Checking up on him, lovely hand on his brow.

Also, You worked in a sneeze! A stifled sneeze. It was amazing.

I'm picturing Dean completely wrapped around the water bottle, becoming one with the couch, maybe nuzzling it a bit. It's kind of adorable.

Thanks for the wonderful drabble! Awesome present.
Twinchy
2009-08-18 . chapter 1
Ha, that was a mean joke with the Wendigo... kind of a good thing though Dean started coughing his lungs out then and there after that, or else Bobby and Sam wouldn't have noticed his fever right away.
deangirl1
2009-08-15 . chapter 1
*grabby hands* I need more of this - puhlese? Love it. I love the visual of Dean on the couch and Sam running the books all over at Bobby's direction -- and of course, Bobby's filing system!LOL! God -- can you just see Bobby and Sam as old bachelor librarians? *pets Dean*
Enkidu07
2009-08-14 . chapter 1
hm... what to say? I know I haven't reviewed this but I love it so much that it makes finding the right words for a review really hard. I love that Dean is right in the middle of the action. Not tucked away in a room somewhere, but right there. Listening in. Where he can keep track of Sam... or really, where Sam can keep track of him. But we don't have to tell Dean that part. I can picture hazy Dean fading in and out, following Sam's footsteps and making sure he stays close. And I am thinking ribs... or maybe stitches. Something that a little pressure through the coughing eases the pain a little. Also love that Sam ignores Dean and talks to Bobby. Taking care of him. Keeping him close. Doing what he needs to do. I adore this.
Liafrombrazil
2009-08-14 . chapter 1
My favourite trio, doing what they do best when they take a break. :)
Dean stifling a sneeze, snuffling back a noseful, doped up, laughing and coughing.
Long-legged Sam dealing with books.
Bobby taking care of them. Of course, he knows a guy - I loved that!
I love your ideas and every word you choose to use. Thank you!
PADavis
2009-08-14 . chapter 1
That was sweet - Dean so very sick. Just yummy.

Phoebe
CiZiwejes
2009-08-14 . chapter 1
Bobby got one hell of a library (mind the pun).

First of all, the image of Dean spooning a hot water bottle made me go aww...cute.

I love the way you made him listen to Sam and Bobby working and helping them by stifling the sneeze and snuffling back, not wanting them to know that he was badly sick.

And Bobby just had the answer to everything. Knowing immediately where to put Dean,just like he knew where to put his books, he knows the boys like the back of his hand and what to do with them . I guess they're off to the hospital huh?

Seriously, I loved your drabbles. They make me think, hehe. This one here by the way, a great one because I always loved a sick, sneezy and stuffy Dean, lol.

Once again, a job well done!
parisindy
2009-08-12 . chapter 1
aw awesome as always!
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