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amortentiaaa
2008-04-09 . chapter 7
Hah, I thought this was a Harry/Hannah (Abbott) fic, at first. Good AU story, but mistakes should've been edited - grammar and canon-wise (spellcheck and HP Lexicon will help you there).

Can Muggles ride brooms if they can't use wands? Poor Hannah. Haha, Harry the Most Charming Smile? Poor Gilderoy in his St Mungo's Ward. And, Padfoot saves the day!
cancan227
2008-01-19 . chapter 7
An Update is in SERIOUS need.
xxBlueBellaxx
2006-09-06 . chapter 7
I just had a great idea. What if (assuming you ever come back to this story) you could have Hannah co-teach Muggle Studies, like Fierenze and Trelawny did in book 5. Hannah could take the beginning years (and insist that she doesn't want the chaos of wands, so no wands allowed in MUGGLE studies) and the regular teacher could take the upper level classes. That way it wouldn't be an obvious cover-job.
Bridgette Carter
2006-07-18 . chapter 7
UPGRADE! UPGRADE! UPGRADE!
Scyithe
2006-05-26 . chapter 7
I love this story so far; you're such a good writer! Please update soon!
goddessa39
2006-05-20 . chapter 7
LOVE IT! Though I have a question: where are the other Weasleys? You'd think that the twins would have shown up by now... usually I love H/Ginny, but I think they should just be brother/sister in this... CONTINUE!
xxBlueBellaxx
2006-04-08 . chapter 1
I hope you do write something to continue this. I love Hannah and Jane and Harry has to see his baby girl again soon.
hp fan
2006-02-26 . chapter 7
pelease UPDATE SOON
RaiseYourVoice
2006-02-02 . chapter 7
This is a very good story!
rock-n-roll-girlfriend
2005-01-06 . chapter 7
this story totally rocks dude!
i like the way you haven't made Harry's wife a total bimbo or any of those awful 'perfect-wife' cliches.
Also you make your chapters just long enough so that readers with short attention spans -like me!- can read this without losing their concentration on the story. Nice one!
One thing I need to point out is that you said in an earlier chapter - can't remember which- that Harry went to the Yule Ball with Lavender. He went with Pavarti not Lavender. But apart form that teeny weeny mistake this story is god. *Adding to favourites*
grey mitten
2004-12-21 . chapter 2
oh jesus, sirius is on crack and pcp...
Kyle Broflovski
2004-09-12 . chapter 7
Good job! This is really different and new to me, i haven't read a fic too much like this yet and i like it so far! Good Job!
Kyle Broflovski
2004-09-11 . chapter 1
Um...I haven't finished this yet, but i just wanted to say that you said that Harry was a witch because he went to Hogwarts... :p
moonfyre
2004-07-31 . chapter 7
Oh, this is the SWEETEST story! usually i dont like any harry-leaves-the-world-and-comes-back-years-later kind of story, but this was GREAT!
Ohime-Yukigi
2004-07-19 . chapter 7
This is the first OC written story I actually liked. The others were all horribly written that it seemed exactly like a Mary-sue story. I hope you write more!
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