Amazing plot twists. I really like this.

I can't really think of anything bad to say, though.

So keep it up, nice story, *insert compliments here*

i love this story! please make another like this one!

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THIS STORY IS ABSOLUTLY AMAZING! I READ ALL OF IT SO FAR AND IT IS PROBOBLY MY FAVORITE KIRBY STORY IN ALL THE UNIVERSE! CONTINUE IT OR I LITERALLY RIP YOUR ARMS OF A-

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please stand by...

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Sorry. but your story is amazing! I would do ANYTHING if you would continue the story! I WANT TO TELL YOU WHAT SHOULD HAPPEN NEXT!

Spencer (SWORD KIRBY) Should attack even though Motoko (NINJA KIRBY) is invincable. And injures Spencer. Suddenly, His sword starts glowing very brightly!

*DRAMATIC MUSIC PLAYS IN BACKROUND*

AND SPENCER USES THE SWORDS BEAM! WHOOSH! That sword beam was so powerful, that the lollypop Motoko ate flies out of her black hole of a stomach and she is horribly injured. Spencer then stops glowing before collapsing to the ground. Motoko is then sent to the dungeons for life. Spencer nearly dies but when Melenie (HAMMER KIRBY) walks over to him thinking he is dead, She kisses him softly on the cheek; tears falling from her face. Spencer opens his eyes just enough for Melenie to notice. She gasps and hugs him tightly. Melenie admits she loves Spencer. With that, They go to the castle to celebrate their victory. Meanwhile, Meta Knight, Sirica and Knuckle joe are treated of their injuries. Meta Knight tells Spencer that he is a true swordman. Spencer is then honored by the royal family and marries Melenie. And they lived happily ever after.

I REALLY HOPE YOU LIKE MY IDEA! AND YOUR STORY INSPIRED ME TO WRITE MY OWN STORY AND I MIGHT MAKE AN ACCOUNT OF MY OWN ON FAN FICTION!

ANY-whoo... AWESOME JOB ON THIS STORY!

Great story!

By the way, could yo umake a sequel to Phineas and Ferb's "A new Villian."?

I wonder if wam bam rock will show up!

good job

this is a great chapter!

man this was good!

yay I hope that spencer learns sword beam soon!

keep it up ok? this is great

*appers in my kirby form which had a sythe and my face looks like a skull and the rest is black but my eyes are darkred* like it? I made it so that I can a kaabii!

Isn't Wiz a boss from Kirby: amazing mirror?

I don't trust him...

yay keep going

This story is quite good.

I like the inclusion of the anime caracters as well as your own OC's