 bluebirdchaos 10/5/11 . chapter 4Amazing! Yes! Bella's Romeo Edward is into the picture at last!
I literally melted into a puddle and sighed along with her! This story, I can tell I was love it so much. I am already hooked, and you are an amazing writer! I cannot wait for the next chapter, I am absolutely excited for more! Please update again very soon!
I love the twist, its kind of sad about the whole beef Jacob and his friends have with the Cullen's, I can only envision how tragic this story is going to be if it follows exactly the R&J story line! I am bound to be a weeping mess lol! Excellent job! Sorry I am rambling, you've just gotten me literally breathless for more... |
 bluebirdchaos 10/5/11 . chapter 3Its kind of foretelling that Jake has a beef with the Cullen's :( |
 bluebirdchaos 10/5/11 . chapter 2Another great chapter! Excited to see how Bella and Ed will react around each other! |
 bluebirdchaos 10/5/11 . chapter 1Amazing, another great start to a story.
I have a feeling I will come to love this story, already it has tugged at my heartstrings- well, Romeo and Juliet and anyother tragedy about starcrossed lovers does. My kind of story.
Thanks for writing. And, on to the next chapter... :) |
 Erikajo 1/10/10 . chapter 4Yay! Awesome chapter! Definitely worth the wait. I hope you are as excited to post updates as I am to read them :) I LOVE this story! |
 cyndi407 1/10/10 . chapter 4this is good...please continue...cant wait to see what comes next |
 Nevaeh09 1/10/10 . chapter 4I love it, hope you update soon. |
 ao88 1/10/10 . chapter 4Oh an EPOV would be great to have in combination with whom ever's POV is required for the next chapter. Let's just say I'm eager to see this story progress further and can't wait for it to be updated. |
 AshOnslaught 1/2/10 . chapter 3hm still building the story so I can't wait till you update. I'll be waiting
Ashley, author of Risky Business |
 AshOnslaught 1/2/10 . chapter 2I feel awkward at all parties so I can relate with Bella. Moving on to read more.
Ashley, author of Risky Business |
 AshOnslaught 1/2/10 . chapter 1I'm intrigued... moving on to read more
Ashley, author of Risky Business |
 rougesoccermom 11/22/09 . chapter 2 Oh, you've got me hooked. Let's see how ugly (wait, can things really get ugly when the Cullens are involved?) this is gonna be. I like it so far. RSM |
 vixen1836 10/3/09 . chapter 2Bravo! I love the quotes at the top, which is an excellent way to integrate your theme. Beautiful, set up. Can't wait for more! |
 vixen1836 10/3/09 . chapter 3Very nice. I like where this is leading. Great job. :) |
 vixen1836 9/28/09 . chapter 1Excellent prologue. Can't wait to continue. |