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bluebirdchaos 10/5/11 . chapter 4
Amazing! Yes! Bella's Romeo Edward is into the picture at last!

I literally melted into a puddle and sighed along with her! This story, I can tell I was love it so much. I am already hooked, and you are an amazing writer! I cannot wait for the next chapter, I am absolutely excited for more! Please update again very soon!

I love the twist, its kind of sad about the whole beef Jacob and his friends have with the Cullen's, I can only envision how tragic this story is going to be if it follows exactly the R&J story line! I am bound to be a weeping mess lol! Excellent job! Sorry I am rambling, you've just gotten me literally breathless for more...
bluebirdchaos 10/5/11 . chapter 3
Its kind of foretelling that Jake has a beef with the Cullen's :(
bluebirdchaos 10/5/11 . chapter 2
Another great chapter! Excited to see how Bella and Ed will react around each other!
bluebirdchaos 10/5/11 . chapter 1
Amazing, another great start to a story.

I have a feeling I will come to love this story, already it has tugged at my heartstrings- well, Romeo and Juliet and anyother tragedy about starcrossed lovers does. My kind of story.

Thanks for writing. And, on to the next chapter... :)
Erikajo 1/10/10 . chapter 4
Yay! Awesome chapter! Definitely worth the wait. I hope you are as excited to post updates as I am to read them :) I LOVE this story!
cyndi407 1/10/10 . chapter 4
this is good...please continue...cant wait to see what comes next
Nevaeh09 1/10/10 . chapter 4
I love it, hope you update soon.
ao88 1/10/10 . chapter 4
Oh an EPOV would be great to have in combination with whom ever's POV is required for the next chapter. Let's just say I'm eager to see this story progress further and can't wait for it to be updated.
AshOnslaught 1/2/10 . chapter 3
hm still building the story so I can't wait till you update. I'll be waiting

Ashley, author of Risky Business
AshOnslaught 1/2/10 . chapter 2
I feel awkward at all parties so I can relate with Bella. Moving on to read more.

Ashley, author of Risky Business
AshOnslaught 1/2/10 . chapter 1
I'm intrigued... moving on to read more

Ashley, author of Risky Business
rougesoccermom 11/22/09 . chapter 2
Oh, you've got me hooked. Let's see how ugly (wait, can things really get ugly when the Cullens are involved?) this is gonna be. I like it so far. RSM
vixen1836 10/3/09 . chapter 2
Bravo! I love the quotes at the top, which is an excellent way to integrate your theme. Beautiful, set up. Can't wait for more!
vixen1836 10/3/09 . chapter 3
Very nice. I like where this is leading. Great job. :)
vixen1836 9/28/09 . chapter 1
Excellent prologue. Can't wait to continue.
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