omg!you are evil! you killed Misty! She is togepi mon! Really sad this one, poor Ash... I liked how was writen and his problems after. So rare to find a good MistyxAsh... do you have any where she is alive?heheehe

i'm speechless. thank god i can still write though...omg, that is so beautiful, sad, almost had me weeping. I remember you from a review you sent me a while back, and why i didn't check this story then, i know now it was a huge mistake. i feel like a stupid kid telling Paul McCartney that one of the beatles songs are so good after the beatles have retired. i hope you havent. this story has changed my life, seriously. thanks

omg! this is by far the best fanfiction i have ever read! it's so sad! keep up the gr8 work. best of luck!: )

mistyashforever!

Very, very beautiful language, and very mature. I loved it. I might have even cried a bit. So many good analogies, like about the ink. And I loved the choice of song. And the thing about the star was very moving. Also liked the parts about Daisy, and the diary, of course. Excellent work!

wow ... that was truly deep.

you are a fantastic writer .. and it is Ash and Misty forever!

Lady Sapphira

You sure do know how to cut to the heart. That was such a sad story. You did a great job on it. Poor Ash and Misty. Such a lovely story, yet so sad. Keep up the great writing.

Really great story. Emotionally rich and deep, brilliantly written and thought out. It actually brought tears to my eyes. I love the 'Cowboy Bebop' music too. One my faves list. Keep up the great work, and thanks for the reviews, cultnirvana.

TOO SAD. HAVE U LOST UR MIND THEY HAVEN'T EVEN HAD THEIR FIRST KISS YET. MAKE A SEQUEL WHERE THEY ARE IN HEAVEN.

You almost made me cry, congratulations, i hardly ever cry. Wonderful story and very real. some people just have a talent for writing and you are one of them, esp. with this story.

Keep up the wonderful work

I wuz in the mood for reading...This...is a VERY good little fic. *o_O*; It's so very sad though...wah...Though, I kept getting confused about when this was all taking place, but it still hit hard. So very sad..I feel sorry for both of them..And...I don't know, it's not the type of fic you can say much about, just kinda sit there in shock for a while...heh...Tat's all...*_*;

Zoe, that was not c&c, that was you showing your immaturity by your inability to leave an insightful review. Something tells me it was your inattentiveness that got in the way of your enjoyment and not Marlex's writing.

As for the author-Good fic, Marlex. While I've seen the theme before, the execution of the plot is often what makes a story good, and you did this well. :)

the story was good for the most part but some parts were dry and boring and others were sappy!

...I think I'll add this one to my favorits. You really know you've just read the best when it takes you as long as it took me to decide how to review it. All I can think to say without spoiling anything for those who read the reviews before hand is, it's damn sad! Really makes you think. Very ispiering! So, Great job, I can't wait to read some more of your work!

waaaaaaah, so sad. i kow how ash feels. i was i love with oe of my frieds, i did't trealized it utill i felt the pai of her movig away.. sigh, this is a poor time for me to tell a morid story. oh, well 10 out of 10

No, you can not make me cry while I'm on the computer at school... *sniffs* I usually avoid angst like the plague, but this was wonderful. So well-written and realistic, particularly the progression of hsi grief. I just don't know what else to say except great job, and I'm going to have to make sure to read it again sometime when I can allow myself to cry over it. *-*;; (Oh, and btw, I liked the eldershipping... _)