|Reviews for Afternoon Nap|
| Pentastic 2/12/13 . chapter 1
This was good. I like that you broke the speech up. It did make it easier to read.
| 000000000000000000000Zero00000 8/17/12 . chapter 1
It'd be nice if you included the crews reaction at seeing this
| White Belt Writer 7/1/12 . chapter 1
| NinjaSheik 9/4/11 . chapter 1
| MnC21 1/23/11 . chapter 1
I like it
| JuzSomeone 12/8/10 . chapter 1
There was a change in the format? :O Sorry, i did not notice it (:
Too engrossed i guess... That or the story that i read was one of the newer ones (:
Aww... So cute :D Does it have a pic? Cuz i would like to see it :P( no i have no idea wats a doujinshi :X
| Justalittlebatty13 8/28/10 . chapter 1
Although using the characters every other paragraph is easier to read the way you wrote this story seemed more natural.
| Gentle Breezes 8/13/10 . chapter 1
Aw, so cute! I like how this isn't heavily implied romance, but rather a bit quieter and sweeter. Nice job. _
| batgirlraven17 6/30/10 . chapter 1
Wow you really captured the little doujinshi better than I could have imagined! You also added some stuff of your own too! I like that, subtle but very sweet. This is how they act and probably what would happen between them if the situation ever arises, nice.
| Ascaisil 1/24/10 . chapter 1
Sorry but I didn't even notice the change in your format, I was to engrossed in the story. xD Once again I must tell you that you're awesome. I was very very happy when I realized you had written a couple of stories, and I'm enjoying going through them all. -
| RoZo4ever 1/10/10 . chapter 1
Wow your an awesome writing i love them as a couple! there so cute!
| Anazarel 11/4/09 . chapter 1
I like it. They are cute but aren't very OOC.
| mstery 10/27/09 . chapter 1
ace and i've read one of yours before you really good at this you know * 5 stars
| Daiske 9/19/09 . chapter 1
SO CUTE! ()
| Tie4 9/16/09 . chapter 1
Hey! Good work on this, These two are one of my favorite pairings! -
I personally like this format. I haven't read any of your other work, but I find this style of writing tends to be easier to read and understand who's talking when. Keep up the good work and I hope to see more!