To be honest, I can't recall if I've reviewed this, the sequal, & Rouge... But I want you to know that you are in my top three favorite & cherished authors.
This preTwi Alice story is the one I hold dearest. THIS is how I see what she did with herself, & I have trouble reading any other preTwiAlice. In fact, I usually pass them up, because nothing compares to this trilogy. I fell even more madly in love w/ her & Jazz & have a better understanding of their bond. The only bummer is that Rouge is incomplete, but I do inderstand & respect your full life..
Just wanted to throw you some love, as it is sincere. :))) - love you!

Amazing! Such a wonderful story and so well done, I am so glad I followed the recommendation from that other story. You had me laughing and in tears. Brilliant.

Hi, just thought I'd drop a note to say that this story has started off brilliantly, it is gripping and my heart breaks for Alice and her pain. Your writing is lovely. See you at the end :)

I thought it was Walt Disney...

Well after two days of not being able to put the story down I have finally finished it! And now I am off to read coalescence again, although perhaps I should do some work before I do that... This story is such a brilliant tale! I loved it, especially the end :P Thankyou for putting in the time to write this masterpiece!
Anea

I really enjoyed this story and my absolute favorite part was the end. You protrayal of that scene was the best I have read. Great job :)

Aww this story is so cool! I love how you're showing her learning about the stock market industry. I know in the books it's mentioned that one of the reasons the Cullens have so much money is because Alice knows the stock market, but I never considered she /learned/ it from somewhere. It's a very interesting take on Alice's upbringing

That was amazing you are really good and you portrayed the characters awsomley :D

Hello Kayla:) I have ta say that it is a pleasure to read your stories.

I'm one of those Portuguese readers of yours I originally found your story on FoForks, and only very recently I found out that you had the story here on .
I was very happy that I could finally thank you for writing this amazing story for Jasper&Alice. I'm starting to read Coalescence, and I'm sure it will be as good as this one, if not better.
Jasper and Alice are not only my favourite pairing on the books but also my favourite characters and to read such an amazing story about them like this one gives me such an extreme pleasure that I can't even properly describe.
I adore all that happened with Alice since her transformation, and specially the way that you introduced James and her relationship with Paul and his clan. It was a very good relationship and I really loved Annette!
All those visions of Jasper were just like a sparkle through the entire story and it just kept me reading like a maniac so that I could finally see the moment they met. Alice relationship with Emily was adorable and I really wish that she could see her again, this time with Jasper by her side :D
I adored the fighting scenes and everything in between! It was such a great reading, I can't say that enough times!
Thank you for writing this amazing story for them 33
I will now read Coalescence and be, once again, amazed by this two!

Love, Maria

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My God.

That was... completely amazing, to say the least. There really are not substantial enough words to describe how much I loved it. It may very well be the most beautifully told story that I have ever read. I am astonished and overwhelmed by the whole thing.

The way that you presented Alice herself was so wonderfully eloquent that I was moved to tears more than once, but the description of world events as she lived them - both vampire & human - throughout the early part of the twentieth century were so unbelievably vivid that I could swear it was a firsthand account. How did you do that?

It was poetry in motion. A magnificent symphony of love & loss. Despair & salvation. The personification of hope itself.

Thank You.

This story was very good, and long too, which is awesome because that makes it better. But in a few instances, the story got a little too long-winded and I had to skip some paragraphs just because I wanted to continue on. But then again, it may have been me wanting to finally meet Jasper XD I read Rogue before this, so now I'm off to read the 2nd edition! :D

Wonderful story! I believe that you captured both Alice and Jasper's personalities perfectly! :) You are exceptionally talented! Keep writing stories!

Great story. I usually only read Edward and Bella but this one called to me.

Loved the story :]

Especially with Alice and all her Alice-ness through and through.

Though, the one thing I do question is her ability to stay with humans...I think you've given her just a bit *too* much self-control...for a newborn, despite her conscience...

Though, at the same time, it would have been a bit dull at the beginning if Alice couldn't interact with humans.