 xAdorablexAngelx 2009-08-14 . chapter 1I loved it! It was well written and very entertaining. :) Write some more for these two, please. They're so cute :) and you're writing is really good. |
 SarahB0B 2009-08-13 . chapter 1That has to be the coolest song shuffle story i've ever read.
I love how everything tied together, most shuffle stories are a bunch of 2 paragraph stories slapped onto one document.
This version was much better.
:)) |
 Synner23 2009-08-13 . chapter 1Aw, this is so ssweet and awesome! I love it!
Great taste in music too! :D |
 Meatball42 2009-08-13 . chapter 1This is awesome! I think some of the later parts wern't completely connected to the songs, but I love the story itself! I hope this is what happens! And you're right; there would have to be some reason why Raj was completely unresponsive to Divya, and this explanation makes as much sense as any other! Love this story! |
 Katie 452 2009-08-13 . chapter 1I absoutly LOVED this! |
 Dance Alice Dance 2009-08-12 . chapter 1Wow. This was so well written and so absorbing...I couldn't tear my eyes from the screen until I was done reading. I absolutely loved how you wrote Evan and Divya. This was absolutely beautiful. Amazing work! :) |
 HopeC 2009-08-12 . chapter 1 This was really well done! I enjoyed it a lot. Keep writing Divan, it's the best!! |
 Rodlox 2009-08-12 . chapter 1one of my favorite lines in this is "I can do that."
I like the back-and-forth, the give-and-take between them.
good demonstrations of Evan's determination to win, and excellent peering into Divya's psyche.
superb story! bravo! |