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Reviews for: Hamptons Serenade
xAdorablexAngelx
2009-08-14 . chapter 1
I loved it! It was well written and very entertaining. :) Write some more for these two, please. They're so cute :) and you're writing is really good.
SarahB0B
2009-08-13 . chapter 1
That has to be the coolest song shuffle story i've ever read.
I love how everything tied together, most shuffle stories are a bunch of 2 paragraph stories slapped onto one document.
This version was much better.
:))
Synner23
2009-08-13 . chapter 1
Aw, this is so ssweet and awesome! I love it!

Great taste in music too! :D
Meatball42
2009-08-13 . chapter 1
This is awesome! I think some of the later parts wern't completely connected to the songs, but I love the story itself! I hope this is what happens! And you're right; there would have to be some reason why Raj was completely unresponsive to Divya, and this explanation makes as much sense as any other! Love this story!
Katie 452
2009-08-13 . chapter 1
I absoutly LOVED this!
Dance Alice Dance
2009-08-12 . chapter 1
Wow. This was so well written and so absorbing...I couldn't tear my eyes from the screen until I was done reading. I absolutely loved how you wrote Evan and Divya. This was absolutely beautiful. Amazing work! :)
HopeC
2009-08-12 . chapter 1
This was really well done! I enjoyed it a lot. Keep writing Divan, it's the best!!
Rodlox
2009-08-12 . chapter 1
one of my favorite lines in this is "I can do that."

I like the back-and-forth, the give-and-take between them.

good demonstrations of Evan's determination to win, and excellent peering into Divya's psyche.

superb story! bravo!
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