Wonderful! I love the way the dialog flowed and how you showed their characters with little narrative. Well done!

nice, but I expected different ending, something more, this stayed open, but it was nice.

A good resolution!

love it!

wish you'd continue with New Years Day Hermione waking up in his arms!

:)

THATS LOVELY

and deffinately one of those stories that should just be continued

hint hint

:)

Love your story!

What a warm and wonderful story. Hopefully they both get their "resolution".

i'd love to see slightly drunk and more honest snape!

lovelovelove.

great read!

Beautiful story...

Wow. This was very realistic and touching at the same time. You can really write. Woot.

I think the best gift Sevvie can get, aside from eventual happiness, is hope for that happiness. My fav. line: My damn heart is going to burst out of my chest. And yes, you can relate to people and their emotions and thoughts better than most writers I've read. Well done.

good job! i hope there's a second chapter on the way..

This is a great Sev/Herm fic. Nicely done. Hope you'll take a look at my stories as well.

Very good story, i liked it very much! I think it could be expanded into a story. All in all , excellent job. dragonsglow