this sounds interesting so far. keep writing!

Wow. I absolutely loved your ending. That was my favorite part of the whole story, because it adds mystery yet satisfies the reader in a content way. Please continue writing!

Update the story! I want to know more! You can't do that, it's so unfair! You explain the prelude (prologue) then stop! That's cheating...sort of. It's cheating us out of the awesomeness of your story! Finish it!

Very interesting. Pls write more.

Hey that was actually pretty good. :)

You should continue it.

this is a good story. you may start writting on it... but i think you need more unique and interesting points...

ack! why did you stop writing? that's so good! hurry back to you computer and type up the rest! i'm dying here!

please.

that was soo good!

write the next so i'm not in pain!