That was beautiful - a fantasic scene from another perspective. You have written this well adn have expressed all emotions perfectly.
Cate

Not that I dislike Alice, she's quite nice and obviously has good taste, but... go Sydney and Vaughn! This was a great fic, I've never read one form her point of view. Probably because she's barely on the show despite playing a rather major role as one of the factors keeping Vaughn from Syd. Anyway, you wrote her feelings extremely well, so much so that I felt really sorry for her instead of being all jealous and prejudiced heheheeh. Excellent work!

Alice is Vaughn's girlfriend ...

That was a really nice story, though, the title doesn't seem quite on the ball with it.

Well written, interesting to see the Vaughn-Sydney interaction from a third person in this way.

umm...call me stupid (many people do), but whos alice? i dont think i caught that.

-angelus

that was so sweet. though i havent seen enuf episodes to actually know what alice looks like, i did see the end of this episode [and do remeber that at the end michael puts hand on sydney's.] continue.

nicely done, it's very effective (and a welcome change) to see this from someone else's perspective. I especially liked how you wrote Alice as she watched Sydney and Vaughn interact, great job!

This was awesome! One of the best Alice POVs I've read yet! :)

I don't really know what is a review, but I just wanted to say that this was a really good fanfiction. We don't really know a lot of things about Alice and Vaughn's relationship but you did a really good job and I loved it. So, I'm sorry if a review is not a comment about your fiction, but I just wanted to let you know that it was really good. I feel bad for the girl though.

Wow! That was awesome! keep writing! I loved seeing it from Alice's eyes...wow...good job!

beautiful...sad but i loved it. I've always wondered what Alice's point of view was...hmmmmmmmm

well anyway thank you soo much

That was so sad! Beautifully written, though-I hope to read more of your work in the future!

very nice... ive read a story similar to this b4 thou... ah well... i like it and whut would've happened if she screamed at michael/vaughn? heh... lata

Awesome fic!