Wow... That was... amazing, beautiful, wonderful, sad, endearing and most of all one of the best stories I've read.

Wow

Just wow

I don't know if you are still reading reviews for this one. I hope so. Angst? Yes. Still, you have written the eternal three-some that could have been if SM had been a tad more adult. In the end, its still a love story. Supernatural beings also have no choice when love happens. Even in this, hope springs eternal. Jake still had his love, controlled it in the end, as will Bella and Edward.

Wow makes you think;)

Pretty vindictive of Jacob isn't it? Shame he couldn't find his true imprint. Not every story has a happy ending. This was an incredible version, and I'm lucky to have found it and read it. Thanks for sharing.

I spent my morning with these characters and WOW I am completely blown away by the originality of the storyline and also how you executed it I had a great time reading and it broke my heart. Wonderful job thanks for sharing it.

Fantastic story.

I would however like to say, if Jacob loved Bella as much as he professed, he would not want her to be left with the eternal memory of the one she chose killing the one she left behind.

If Jacob loved Bella as much as he said, he would have let her go, let her love where her heart loved, love gives, love receives, love does not take or seek to injure.

Jacob's sacrifice of love was not pure, but blackened by the desire to forever taint the love Bella held for Edward, that is not love.

Hopefully, after a few years, Bella will realize this & mourn what was good about Jacob, forgive what became controlling & spiteful, & let what was an immature love, fade.

jansails/jan2

Holy crap, this was great! Okay, I never read vamp stories. Like, I can count them on two hands, pretty much. But this one was interesting and different, and I loved it. Nice job! I felt so sad for Jacob at the end when he didn't phase, but then to hear the letter he left Bella...wow. I felt sorry for him, for Bella leaving him, but after that...nope. :D Hopefully he didn't know about Bella forgetting human things once she's a vampire. That's probably the only thing that will let and her Edward be happy.

This was good, really good. Nice job, as always. :)

Holy crap! I so did not see that ending happening. Very well written. WOW. I'm just completely thrown. I don't even know how to put into words how great this story was. Awesome job and I'll being looking forward to more from you!

Oh gosh, the ending was intense. Good story, I liked it.

well, i can't say it was the angsty-est thing i have ever read, but i did so enjoy the plot :) it was odd not seeing any filler, but a bit refreshing. i've never been a team jacob, but i can't help but weep for him :(

wow. that is so dark, a perfectly tragic story. now i will have to read some fluff to get me out of this funk... but I'm sure glad i read this. thanks for the tale.

Holy. Crap! I don't even know where to start... Though I am team Jacob, this story just... Wow! All of your stories are amazing and I am just in awe of the skills and talents in your writing!

Amazing!

wow...wow...wow! a-m-a-z-i-n-g! i have now words, but like someone else said...there arent that many good vampire stories around anymore, but this one was fantastic!

withthevamps, terrific story...the ultimate tragedy.

Best, Ann in SC

withthevamps, this is excellent. Can't wait to get to the next chapter...

Best, Ann in SC