Very good story so far! I really hope you continue this!

Cool story. I do like what you did with Sam Lane's character. I like the conversation they had Lane and Lane. And that as great with superman at the end. How he saved that kid. Hope there's another chapter soon. It was really good.

Okay I like what you did w/ Sam Lane's character. It's intersting 2 see how you have Lois and Sam's father/daughter relationship. And then Superman is still feared . I like this. I always though it was a shame where they cancelled the series in the 90's. Even as a litte kid. But this is really good.

You are a good writer. You pick the right images, you say a lot without saying much at all, and your transitions are well thought out and pretty much well executed too - up until Sam Lane's intro I had a gigantic smile on my face because omg - this is so good!

So Sam Lane - you did a good job with him too, but it was just a little distracting. In the handful of Superman comics I've read he and Lois have had a very tenuous relationship - which you definitely demonstrated in this chapter - but I don't know, I think I was distracted because in STAS he was pretty much a *good* guy...right? He was in that episode with Titano and he and Lois seemed pretty tight. And I think the reason Lois was able to break into the military complex in 'Legacy' was also because of her dad. I could have read their relationship completely wrong. Of course, I am blabbing about this because I am curious, not because it detracts from your story - you picked a personality for Sam Lane you carried it through, and I like that. It's especially cool because it's not often that Lois runs up against people that jar her so much.

And that last scene...ah! so sad! so good! I am looking forward to more.