This is beautifuly crafted.

Beautiful!

Of all the Mello centered fics I have read your the only one I know that stays in character and writes him well, I truly enjoy reading your fics annd I can only hope that you will write more Mello fics.

Hmmm I wouldn't mind reading Near centered fics either... :)

Beautiful, simply beautiful.

loved it.

The ending made my eyes water a bit. Very wonderful story.

I found this recommended on TvTropes and I've got to say: Wow.

Your Mello is amazingly characterised and your writing is really amazing. The ending was beautiful (and I don't even know if that's the word that fits but that's the one I'm going with).

that made me cry

Wow. I'm just really.. speechless. This was so insightful, and written so well. You have an amazing way with words, let me tell you that.

I also liked the idea - seven kisses - though the last scene could have been a story on its own. I think that was my favourite section, as well. Got a lot of the best lines.

You can - and should - be very proud of this! Definitely into my faves :)

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i'm close to falling asleep at the computer, so i shall put this onto this site tomorrow morning.

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Beautiful and poignant. I always love getting a glimpse into character's lives beyond what we've seen, and being that Mello is one of my favorite Death Note characters, I especially enjoyed your piece. Thank you for the lovely read. You understand Mello as if you sat down and spoke with him or got deep inside his head. Great, great, great. I don't really know what else to say.

This was really good, I liked it.

Out of all your stories, this was my favourite. So beautifully, so meaningfully written - and the quotes were wonderfully appropriate. My favorite segment was the kiss with Near... so sweet. Thank you for writing such a fabulous piece!

A-MA-ZING!

I was reading this while listening to Mellos theme song (I had to replay it a few times because its only like a minute long but what the hey . . .) and I love it!

You always manage to keep people so in-character it scares me!

I love reading your stories!

x

I have GOT to stop going through your archives all at once. It can't be healthy. Everything I read goes and draws me in and makes me smile and then tears me into little shattered tiny pieces. I think my favorite prompts were "Christmas" and "Terror". Little, trusting baby Near and sweet, gentle Linda, and Mello's reactions to them. I love this.