I really hope you make this story have a happy ending. I think Spike and Ed deserve one. Good story by the way and I liked your first one also

ohhkkay.. This is definitely better than the first time u put this story here in FF!! Lol. more insight! i can't wait for the next chapters!! Update! Update!

did u make changes to this? cos i remember reading the 1st time u uploaded this.. (and then i was disapointed to find out that it was no longer here in FF when i was looking for it..)

This story is one of the most well written pieces on this website I have ever read. Your pacing, characterization, plotlines, subplots, and dialouge, (both exterior and interior,) is fantastic. Can't wait for more. Don't change a thing.

closet fan 16

Yay! Another chapter updated :) I'm anxious to see what happens next

more great writing, i can't offer any criticism i'm afraid.

Hi, wow, it just gets better and better. The emotion is so real and vivid, I find it amazing that you can write both sides of it. As usual the gramer and spelling is impecable. I don't know if you are a girl or a boy, but your ability to write from both a female and a male perspective amazes me. And Spike's thoughts about where women get their sexy moves was genius and very funny. I also like that you seem to be putting up a chapter every day, that's a big plus. Please keep updating!
-IDJ

whoa, more excellent writing and characterization plus a fantastic cliffhanger. nice work, can't wait for the next chapter.

Aw! Poor Ed! I got teary-eyed reading this chapter! I want to give her a hug and give Spike a good punch in the gut. Heehee! Good chapter! And gotta love Jet with his extreme ultimatums. I wonder what Spike will decide to do!

Great chapter! I can't wait to read more!

Purple Pirate Lex ^_^

Good to see this story again, I missed it. Do you intend to do a follow up? In any case, excellent once again.

Heehee! I liked this chapter. Edward's still adorable! Yeah, once again, I'm glad you're back! This story's shaping up to be a good one!

I have just a few nit picks, unfortunately. It's the part nobody likes. It's nothing grammatical or anything, but I just find myself getting so thrown off when there's not a separation or line between sections. I thought Faye was on the Bebop when you suddenly started talking about her side of the story. (That, and I just can't really fathom Spike saying "cripes." It just doesn't sound like a word he'd say.)

It's a really great story though, and I can't wait to read what comes next! I've always liked your stories! (You know you're good when you can convert a Spike/Faye believer!)

Keep up the good work! I love it!

Purple Pirate Lex ^_^

Hi! I liked it alot. You make the characters act just how they should in that serario. And you have the abillity to discribe things perfectly, and flowingly. I admire your talent, and apparently you know how to proofread (a thing most people don't know), I didn't see any typos, or grammer mistakes. (Gramer is my strong point) And although the whole Ed/Spike thing is a little weird for me, you present it well, so I don't mind it so much. I have nothing to say about improving it. The only thing is that it's a bit gloomy, but I realize it's supposed to be that way. So, no complaints! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
-IDJ

I liked it! My only complaint is that it only has one chapter so far. PLEASE WRITE MORE! (can you tell I'm a bit hyper?)
-IDJ

I love this! Update soon please :)

Yay yay yay! It's back! ^_^