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Invader Johnny
2009-08-13 . chapter 1
Heh... the ending cracked me up!... Now let´s see if you are alive for another Tara fic dude!

Invader Johnny Signing Off.
Thomas Linquist
2009-08-13 . chapter 1
Run man! The last thing you need is to get caught by both versions of Tara.

It was nice to see her have a bit of a revelation about herself though. At least she understands that those other Taras can only control her if she lets them. Maybe if you pointed this out, she won't beat you too badly. Maybe...
Muzzlehatch
2009-08-13 . chapter 1
Don't run, you'll only die tired.
bigherb81
2009-08-13 . chapter 1
That one was good nice to see yourself through your own eyes helps you to become a better peron in my opinion. Also liked the ending too that was a nice touch. Looking forward to 97.
Captain IT
2009-08-13 . chapter 1
Quick, in here Whitem.
( Whitem hides in what looks like a dojo.What he didn't know was this was KPs dojo)
Hi Kim, Hi Shego! Both of you going to work out?
( Kim) Yes Captain, we both want to say fit.
That good. Oh!by the way, Star called me and said he couldn't make it tonight so he sent over a sub for the both of you.
(Kim) Sounds wonderful Captain. I'll get Tara on my cell and she if wants to come over to work out too.
Great idea Kim. I'll catch you ladies later.Bye now.
( Captain IT walks down the street whisling ' It's a hap-hap-happy day')
screaming phoenix
2009-08-13 . chapter 1
Now where did did I put that stick I use to beat authors with?
Shrike176
2009-08-13 . chapter 1
On the one hand, from my experience, having a cheerleader mad at you is never a good thing. On the other, at least you just pissed off the girl next door Tara rather than the big scary Tarable or the devil Tara. :)

Congrats on almost reaching a hundred. Can't wait to see what comes next!
kim's 1 fan
2009-08-13 . chapter 1
Wait a minute!
You can't do that to poor defnseless Tara!
I'm gonna tell Kim, and she'll fix you good.
And when she's done with whatevers left, Ron will have a word or two with you, and when he's finished, Rufus will have some choice words for you.
And then when there all through, if there is anything left, it's my turn!(Hahahahahahahahahaha)
Great story bud.
I really loved how you had the real Tara talk with Tarable, and Devil tara.
And realise how she's got a little bit of both of them within her.
Once again, great story,
I really loved it.
God Bless,
Larry
JCS1966
2009-08-13 . chapter 1
This is whatcha get for messin' with a sweet girl like Tara...

You'd better be glad she isn't like the other versions floating around here. Cree-py.

Fun stuff, Whitem. Hope ya live long enough to make it to 100 stories!
Katsumara
2009-08-13 . chapter 1
Haha. That was too funny, whitem. You better run before she gets ya.
sharper1988
2009-08-13 . chapter 1
Hm... a strange series of conflicting emotions from Tara that we never see.

Anyways, Whitem, congrats to your 98th story and hope you reach the century mark soon.

Thanks
Sharper
Comet Moon
2009-08-13 . chapter 1
snort
CajunBear73
2009-08-13 . chapter 1
Run whitem, run!

She's got 'friends' and she's not afraid to have them chase you...

CB73
MrDrP
2009-08-13 . chapter 1
So what happens when Tarrable meets Grande Sized Ron? Or TaraDevil meets Zorpox? Or a revenge-seeking Kim uses your Love Potion Number 9 on you and Drakken? The story-telling possibilities are endless ...

Thanks for the different read!
Mr. Wizard
2009-08-13 . chapter 1
Don't let her catch you, man.

Fun little piece. I doubt most of us would care to run into fictionalized versions of ourselves.
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