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linalove
2009-12-18 . chapter 22
Loved it.As for ideas...I don't know...But I'm sure you'll think of something.:)
tubagirl-747
2009-12-17 . chapter 22
Hey!
Nice chap! I think she needs to get out more now, haha, maybe meet BATMAN! Hahaha :)
Keep up the awesome work
linalove
2009-12-09 . chapter 21
Things are getting worse for Kiara...Why did he hit her?God...I hope Joker does something about that...
Great chapter,hon.Update soon.:)
tubagirl-747
2009-12-08 . chapter 21
Yeah! 2 updates in 2 days! amazing! :)
The story's sounding really good so far, I like the plot right now, and maybe something big will happen soon so that it can become more interesting ( not that it isn't! =D ) ?? haha as you may be able to tell, i'm not a good writer and have no ideas, but if i ever do, i'll let you know ! Keep up the great work!
Selene.is.the.Joker's.girl
2009-12-08 . chapter 21
I have been reading this story since you started and i absolutely love it! I havent been reviewing cos ive been busy but REST ASSURED IM READING!! Cant get enough of it actually... *blush*

Your Joker is amazing and is in character all the time! Oh and btw the steamy hot sex scenes = BLISS! ;)
Lol im deranged...

Well PLEASE KEEP WRITING!! Im soo obsessed with the story that i keep rereading it.. (im a saddo..)

I have a couple of ideas for you. First i want you to have a kind of a big story arc where the mob will want to kidnap Kiara and succeed and J will be ** and try to save her and they will get like stuck in the mobs place and have to help each other out lol. Also have Kiara wounded BADLY , as in stomach wound and bleeding out in front of J but he will help in the last minute.. :)
Then Kiara can really start to trust him and his feelings will deepen as well. :)

You dont have to use these but it will really make my day if you do! Oh and each chapter makes my week!! Love it! PLEASE KEEP THEM COMING!! :) You ve got die-hard fans here to please! *that would be me ahem..* ;)

Much love and update please!
PureDarkMagic
2009-12-08 . chapter 21
Oh! Interesting!
I love it!
Please update soon =)
Nekokitten1123
2009-12-08 . chapter 21
interesting i cant wait for more. please post soon.
linalove
2009-12-08 . chapter 20
Poor Kiara...
Great chapter,hon!:)
linalove
2009-11-28 . chapter 19
Loved it,hon.I hope he won't be mad at her or anything...
Update soon.:)
SatanReaper666
2009-11-27 . chapter 19
ok you should have the joker act weierd, then he should ask who she was hugging on, then go from there.
tubagirl-747
2009-11-27 . chapter 19
Sounding good! :) Can't wait for more!!
Maybe Kira will get a bit rebellious soon? ;)
Taylor-Rose15
2009-11-25 . chapter 18
I love the story so far! I can't wait to see what happens next and I hope that you update soon!
SatanReaper666
2009-11-17 . chapter 18
Cliff hanger! I love cliffs, you can always let your mind wonder...
MadDoggyClown
2009-11-17 . chapter 18
Ohh, it's getting really interesting by now xD

By the way I think the word you're looking for is sadistic, not masochist. If he's a sadist he would enjoy other peoples' pain, a masochist is quite the opposite. Just to let you know ^^;
linalove
2009-11-17 . chapter 18
:)
Update soon.XD
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