I adored it! There's a serious lack of Early Edition fic, and specifically Gary/Toni. I know the story's marked complete, but I hope you'll reconsider and expand upon their new relationship.

I don't know Toni's character yet, but I want to know more. (That's because I've only seen EE through Season 2.)

LOVE the Gary/Marissa banter. Right on!

Can we have some more please? Love your descriptions ... "fragile like spun sugar," and "The occasional blare of a car horn echoed through the damp night air, and fog horns bellowed from ships on the lake, sounding eerily close. It was a lonely sound and Gary shivered, remembering his night spent in a warehouse near the docks." Oh, you really got me with the later.

I also haven't yet see the ep with the homeless man ... Can't wait. It sounds like its 100 percent angst!! :)

You so made my morning! I do hope you post more soon!

Yeay! A new story! Like always, extremely good writing. I'm really looking forward to more. Soon :-)