| Reviews for: Cold Snap |
 The Fortune Teller 3/9/12 . chapter 1Gotta love Nina; I think you captured her perfectly here. |
 Domyouji Love 11/1/09 . chapter 1I enjoyed this take on the Nina/Lee/Anna triangle. It was excellently written and I am intrigued always by this pairing. :)
All of the characters were dead-on. It was great. |
 P.O.J.A 9/13/09 . chapter 1oh this was a hot drabble! i love nina's kick-butt attitude even to an a-hole like lee :D she never fails me, and you didn't fail her persona one bit! this was a great story i enjoyed it very much. you should try writing more for them, whether it be about the sister triangle or either one of the girls with lee. good job!
Sincerely,
P.O.J.A _ |
 KingCombo 8/18/09 . chapter 1this is a great fic! I shouldn't even consider it a fic.. Since you got all of the characters down so perfectly, it seems like this is something that would be bound to happen in the real Tekken series. (Thats not an insult btw. It had me completly attracted to the story) You NEED to continue with this... I'm so happy to see that it stayed in one reading level, and didn't sway off.
If i could rate this, I'd give it 5 stars.
Could you do me a favor and review my fic for me please? I've really only gotten my friend to read it, and review it. I'd much appreciate it. Thank you! |
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The opening paragraph was brilliant :3 I loved how you constantly contrasted the two sisters. Throughout the whole story really. Anna's reaction was predictable, but that's expected of her; but I really loved how you handled Nina's character, especially at the moment of truth.
Wonderful work as always! |
 Thunderxtw 8/13/09 . chapter 1Oh my. Madame Batolli writing a Williams and Lee fic? Tekken fiction be damned. XD
What are the chances? Your take was short, vivid, and somewhat painful (emotionally of course). Particularly, when Nina "takes" from Lee and near the end when Nina says her sister "has a habit of picking the wrong men" to Lee, and Anna's overall reaction to Lee's confession of being with them both.
The triangle between the three, while often overused in most stories, isn't written like it normally is here.
You write all the characters well enough and describe their demeanor and personalities accurately; Nina's deadpan behavior and Lee feeling him and Anna were the "failures of their families." It's so fitting and it's refreshing to see a believable and underused element like that used in a story.
Of course, Xiaoyin and Xiaowang, being your two flagship ships, is where you really excel, but this ficlet was nice as well.
Thanks for the read. |
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