this totally rocks

Okay so now where's the sequel?

csniffel) dat was just (sob) so beuatifel

Wow. Its over :( :). Great ending. I really really enjoyed this story, although i read the majority of it a long time ago. It's one i remembered quite vividly. I hope you write another Lord of the rings fic. That was brilliant. Well done. Your a very talented writer!

Wow, I'd almost given up on this story. :)

I'm so glad you finished it, it is an amazing concpet and very well written.

Good job!

Ah... at last

I was worried that you've forgotten about this story... so glad u finished it.

The ending is a little abrupt I think... not covering everything (like Lis' brother forgot his name)... but it is justified. I guess it'd probably b the best for eveyone..

Again... great job! and wonderful imagination!

Keep Writing! I look forward to your future work!

Really great story. It was different from what I am used to. I liked it very much. (

Great story! Are you gonna finish it? I hope you are, I spent all of this evening reading at and if you don't finish I will feel like an even bigger loser that I already am for waisting my evening reading fan fic on the internet. Please finish your story.

oh please please e-mail me if u update the story..

I can't stop now...

and it's 2:30 in the morning!

wonderful work!

LOVE IT!

Hi :), well I just wanted to know if you are thinking on continuing this story, I have been waiting and waiting, :( I love this fic, is really good, it was one of the best views of middle earth on our time I have ever read, so please if you have the time continue with it :). I want to read more of this!, please!

Be well and take care.

AAAAAAAH! You have not updated your wonderful story! aaaaahh! Please do soon, i really want to know how this one turns out, hehe

Hey...Woooow this is a really good story and not that corny Mary Sue stuff at all. I loved how you've created all the characters according to their past lives and stuff. I Also like the romance between Lee and Lis. Please continue its a great story just waiting to be finishing. Cant wait for the next chapter

Good Luck

AAAAAAAAAAAAAH! Well my computers working again :D BUT NOW IM SAD! SHE CANT BE KILLED! Poor Lee, Poor Lis! Evil Sauron! Damn, i need the next bit :( ITS SO GOOD! The writing is supurb! Noo! Lee and Lis have to be together! She cant *gulp* die..

Please try to get the next bit out soon, im dying already!

*Peace out*

!...! MY COMPUTER IS STUFFING UP AND IT WONT LET ME INTO CHAPTER 9! This story is wonderful! It is so original! I love the fact that they are schools, and the fellowship are 9 of the students and teachers or whatever :D Lee's and Lis's realationship is so SWEET! Damn, if only this was R rated *sigh* cant have everything in life now can we...ANYWAY! Woot, im only up to chappy 9 so ill review again! Well done!

Hey, I haven't read this fic for a while, and I noticed you haven't updated in a long while but I still think it's the best alternative LOTR story I've read. Please update soon!