ion esther!!
such a cute couple!

You should so CONTINUE THE STORY!! I want to know what happens when they meet up with Esther again. Oh please continue. I love IonxEsther. So cute!!

lovely fic :D
I thought the characterization was very on-the-spot!
cute :D

:D! this was great! absolutely marvelous! XP i loved it!

Cute and short oneshot!

I think you could improve on making the introduction more catchy *wink* you know what i mean.

But good job :D

Nicely done! I'd love to see more. I have you on alert. Please don't give up on this story.