Huh.. that's actually really good. Nice job.

It seems somewhat hopeful. Ended up being happier than I thought it would be. Or maybe not. I'm not sure if that makes any sense to anyone. It barely made sense to me...

I can't quite put my finger on what it is, but something about this really made me like it. There are so many non-AU fics about them defying the "laws" of being Nobodies and falling in love anyway, and this is so different it struck me as incredibly real. I think that's what it was.

Good job.

-Kiki

i really like this. it's vague and wonderful and sad. it's like a poem.