Fantastiko.
Exeis talento.
Einai para polu wraio kai den ksereis pws tairiakse tin sunomilia pou eixa me tin kopela mou prin apo ligo^.~

i did have a good laugh. Well written. Good Job.

Haha xD What I noticed was how often you pressed the fact that Haruka was totally hawt xD

Insanely ridiculous and insanely funny lol =P

Totally insane! :D

That touch me gently line makes me laugh no matter how many times I read it.

Wow... Go Erissu-kun! ACK! *runs for her life from Michiru* ERISSU, HELP!

hilarious! love the “How many times I have told you that I want you to touch me gently?” scene and the frying pan, lol..