Wow, and I thought I was a good writer. Your story of book is amazing if it's published I got to go to Barnes and Nobles and pick up copy.

Nice fic! The plot sounds kinda cool and it's a well written story (e.g. no horriffic spelling mistakes), and i look forward to you updating!

Hee hee...I feel sorry for Nabooru! That's pretty funny, though! I like your use of descriptive words. Keep going!

Mwee, you awesome. The Enya title alone makes this spiffy, and the excellent writing is certainly a good thing. Reading a story with Sheik and Zelda as separate entities is a very nice thing indeed. Keep it up, m'dear.

*StarWolf*

I for one think that your story is very vivid in detail(although my computer wouldn't load chapter two) and there are enough hints in the chapters to get what happened in the story; a good trait. I would say make your chapters a little longer though; this way, it takes people longer to read and it means less posts for you. On the next plus side, it also makes the reader happy! Less pages to load. Overall, the story is developing nicely...although you might want to explain how the characters know where to go in this new world...

Please continue the story! I have actually become attached to it unlike many other stories and it could turn out to be one I will read over and over...GOOD LUCK!*winkies!*

Gengetsu Ryokou

Xel-chan! ::glomp:: I told you I'd review ... it's Cres' . I like this chapter a lot, if I haven't said that before ... poor Link though! He's so oblivious, hehe. But it's written well, and I especially like the way you play the characters, as I think I've told you a thousand times before. My favorite line, I think is: Then she exploded, “Holy hell, it’s cold out here!” Hehe. Keep writing! Don't despair! There are those of us who eagerly await the next installment!

VERY GOOG WORK! *Whistles* You a great writer! Tell me your doin' somin good with Malon! PLEASE? she's cool! she should be somone important *nods head* Are you going to pair her up with somone? and if so who? Link? or... Sheik? Choices choices... eh? This is a really good story update soon! I LOVVEE IT! :D Great work! Well... I am just ranting now... So i'll let you go.. SO YOU CAN WRITE MORE! *nods head approvingly* :D ok then,

Lata,

JKat

p.s. Your AWSOME! :D

Xel-chan! You've outdone yourself again! I love what you do with the characters, you know that. It's an excellent story, keep writing! As always, I am awed by your skills! You're awsome! Great job!

That is quite a substantial chapter, isn't it? Hmm, the plot thickens... Very neat. I'm wondering what's going to happen next. *shrug* Well-written, so far; keep up the good work-hope you're having as much fun writing it as I am reading it!

AAHH!CONTINUE!YOU MUST!

Cool! UPDATE MORE! FASTER!

Great story so far! Please update soon!

Oh, how fun! I'm hooked already. I love the characterization; each character has a distinct voice; that's a good thing. The dialogue feels very natural, too. Looking forward to more! :)

this is good so far, i'm intersted to no wat happens next, do update soon!