lol that was good. funny and light. thank you

That was really quite entertaining... I believe I'm still laughing my ass off.

hahaha this is so funny. i dont usually read haruka yukino fic but this is funny

Hahahahahahahahah that was so FUNNY!! Ohh That was great.I loved it.

My Favorite part:

“Where is she?!” A shadow threw open the huge double doors of the palace. Angry violet eyes glinted in the moonlight. “I have to sleep on the couch tonight!”

“Drive!” Yukino cried urgently. Haruka snored lightly on her tense shoulder.

Ohh I could just imagine Yukino panicking and screaming out "drive"!

Oh you know what I would love to read about is what happened after Natsuki and Shizuru went home.I would imagine Natsuki to be really pissed,more so them Shizuru.

lmao oh my gosh the flashing! hahaha *wipes tears away* thnx for the gr8 fic, but one thing i wanted to ask was for no. 4 u had "Angry violet eyes glinted in the moonlight" whose eyes r u refering 2? cos shizuru has red eyes and natsuki has green and violet is a bluey purple cokour...

This was great! LOL

My fave parts:

"Loosing the vote of the lesbian population." Oh no, we can't have that! Makes one wonder exactly what kind of "immature" ShizNat public display of affection that got Haruka all riled up.

Yukino closed her eyes and shook her head with a long suffering sigh. “You mean to tell me that down town is taken hostage by school children protesting homework, in the middle of the years busiest holiday and in a situation that calls for diplomacy of the highest order, you’ve let Haruka escape?” LMAO! Yes, I can just see it now: Yukino massaging her forehead muscles and popping some migraine pills in the limo on the way to where Haruka was.

“Well the only rocks that work on her can’t be lifted by humans and she dodged the wrecking ball!” The attendant whimpered.

"Maybe vodka was the source of all knowledge." Yes, Midori, you are so wise in your ways, hehehe. No wonder alcohol was banned from Haruka, lol.

“You call that a rock?! My girlfriend has bigger stones that you!” LOL

Hmm, trust Shizuru to save the almost unsolvable fight - the Viola way! Bow chika bow bow. XD I'm surprised she didn't materialize on site!

And that last one... LMAO! That's right, when you and your friend need a strong hand (with guts!) to put out a fire, you can count on General Armitage!

This was such a great visual:
“Ah-ha!” Haruka seized the offending candle and blew it out. She pressed it against the stunned womans chest and nodded to the naked woman on the bed “better be careful, all the oil you have on could be a fire hazard.”

We don't see to many Haruka-centered fics, and I'm always on the look out for funny Mai-Hime/Mai-Otome ones. Well done!

Great piece you have here. Thanks

lol loved this

That was hilarious, thanks for the laughs! ^_^

I laughed so hard for all of these! The first one was okay, a little "set-up too nicely", but the line "They should know never to give her anything with Shizure Viola in it!" absolutely cracked me up.

Line "she dodged the wrecking ball" in the second one gave me this incredibly vivid and hilarious mental image. Although Yukino flashing Haruka at a school for little kids? Isn't that public indecency? LOL, but yes, *very* good reasons for voting Yukino!

Number three was my favourite. The exchange of Orphan->House->Haruka then Haruka->House->Orphan is just priceless. Haruka's last line was total winner.

The fourth one would be my second favourite...“I have to sleep on the couch tonight!” LOL, for once, Shizuru is couched!

The last one made me laugh at Haruka's lines, and how non-"innuendo-pick-up" she is.

I really enjoyed the shorts, lots of laughs!

Awesome! You should write more haruka and yukino since there's not many out there! (Oh and Shiznat as supporting characters wouldn't hurt too ^_^)

lol that was a good laugh :P
i love your yukino in this!

Oh my god it was funny the times Yukino saves Haruka being Haruka and the part Haruka talking Yukino having bigger rocks than the slave. You misspell Shizuru as Shizune and use loose in stead lose. I hope you fix those couple of mistakes.