love itx

just make him forget about his fiance! he needs hermione!

For a story with so few words, yours has such depth, atmosphere, substance. The little sketches that make up each chapter tell so much without actually telling anything. In every writing class I've ever taken, the lecturers have always stressed the importance of showing as opposed to telling, and your story does this so well. I usually love stories with long, long chapters and a lot of substance, but this is a great exception to that rule. Keep your style going, it's uniquely successful, I look forward to more.

oh wow please update soon! I want to know what happens

please keep it up x

AW NO DON'T LET HIM GET AWAY! COME ON! PLEASE UPDATE SOON I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!


ha sorry about the caps I...just...*cough*...wanted to show how much I enjoyed these little tidbits =)