That was very well written, but sad, I can only hope that her exile isn't forever. It was also a very unusual idea. I really felt Albus' coldness, perhaps because it's so unusual for him.

This was a wonderful story. I do hope you continue soon. Poor Minerva. I hope Albus speaks to her in the future and they will be able to clear it up. Great job.

Poor Minerva! One slip-up and she lost Dumbledore's respect completely. He was a bit harsh--why, I thought he'd be shocked! ...In a good way, of course... :D
Nice title--and yes, I did think of Genesis when I read the ending. I always liked the 'fall from grace' parts of things.

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plz say they get together later plz

it was a good one shot story thanks

A very interesting story! I do hope you'll continue this :D