|Reviews for Rising Storm|
| ZenBall1878 4/13/13 . chapter 39
I loved your series as it had a good plot line instead of the normal just focused on romance stories. But When I started to read the third story, whenever Nessie was mentioned my brain was screaming- MARY SUE, MARY SUE. Everyone loved her, and I mean like love, love her. There was also no emotional maturity in Nessie and I just did not get why actually did Nessie needed Jacob. She claimed to not to be able to forget Cody after his death and she relied a lot on Seth. It was almost Jacob was just a side character or something. To me it was not actually much romance, but more of adventure and maybe a little bit drama.
I do not mean to come off as harsh but these are some points I think you may want to improve on your story. But you had a great story and everything. It is hard to find these kind of stories which actually have a good plot line so great job on that!
| Guest 12/17/12 . chapter 1
YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER ! You make everything so suspensful ! It is super amazing
| Choc 5/4/12 . chapter 39
Wow... you're story is truly amazing :) Keep going ;)
| FluteMonster101 3/20/12 . chapter 39
This story is breathtaking. Ive read all three but this one actually made me sob towards the end. With alice being human, almost dying, and leah/nahuel. You have truely touched my very soul in writing this sequal trio of books. I salute you.
| Tenshi Yami- Angel of Darkness 11/27/11 . chapter 39
Ok I know I didn't commen on the other two stories, I just kept want to read he next sequel. You have an amazing talent for this and I do hopethat you get time to the future fic that you planned. Acerbic all if you had me hooked just by reading the first few chapters to the first story I know that thefuture fic is goingto be amazing. The twists and turns that you put in all of them were shocking but I had to my favorite was this story and the first one. This had more o he action butthe first one had more of the romance, and I do love both.
| eve99 11/7/11 . chapter 38
Amazing! Read through all 3 stories at once. Third story the best by far. Very original, captivating plot, and a great ending. Would love to know what happens to Alice.
I'll look out for more of your stories.
| Wow 9/17/11 . chapter 39
Oh. My. Gosh. Best. Story. EVER! You have such potential so please keep writing!
| droga1 7/1/11 . chapter 39
Instead of a totally new series, how about future outtakes? Like when vampires where exposed to the world, when the future people were sent back to the past, and when they returned from it. What happened to the Cullen family, maybe a summary of that. When Seth imprints on Rose, etc... just future outtakes instead of a new series.
This is really good.
| lzytigger 5/13/11 . chapter 22
have my attention
| julie 2/10/11 . chapter 39
omg this series was amazing! i enjoyed it soooo much! you could become a writer! i seriously hope you choose to continue this series it is the best series ever besides twilight lol! thanks for many hores of reading :)
| luv2beloved 1/22/11 . chapter 20
It is amazing how much she seems to hate the child.
| luv2beloved 1/22/11 . chapter 17
Seems like she doesn't really seem too happy about the baby. Not nearly as mush as Jake does
| Lei 12/21/10 . chapter 39
You are an amazing writer. This story had so many twists and turns. It was an incredible story to read. I hope you write a fourth installment. I don't know how you came up with this premise but you are truelly gifted.
| Greek Wise Girl 10/28/10 . chapter 39
Hey, I've finished reading your stories and I was kinda hoping you would be putting up a sequel... The New World brings so much interests in me, especially on how the two of them would make it through a life that they almost know what's about to happen...Chapter thirty five was my favorite... Awesome...!
| Oli 9/20/10 . chapter 37
its soooo awesome how u've changed alice into a human again
u should make a sequel about alice and jasper and their realitonship after shes turned human and if they are going to change her or if she like ages ssooooo plz plz plz plz plz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
at least attemp to write a sequel about them cuz i am like dying here !