I like it so far)

Great characterization of Jill. _! Although I spotted a military error in your fic (but it's not drastic). Women *are* allowed to join the Marines.

nice job Kat, yer a good writer you should keep it up. I'm impressed that you came up with all that on yer own. My little goober is gonna be a best seller! xD Anywho Katya the story was very nice and you elaborated in her past life and that's pretty interesting. You have quite the imagination. n.n

i like it! please continue soon!

This story is good, little short but good! Also you appear to have Jill downtact alright, keep on writing I'll be sure to look out for the rest of your story! _