great fic. ^_^ Ja.

I adore how shy Axel can be in these stories. It is such a cute and refreshing change from the normal arrogant attitude people use for him.

teehee the end made me giggle :3

I usually tend to steer away from lemons (I know, what kind of yaoi fan am I?!), but when I read the summary for this fic, I just couldn't pass it up. And let me just say, I was not disappointed. This was not smut. I don't care what anyone says. Rather, just like the theme of this fic, this story is art. Sketch and Shiver is to PWPs what nude art is to porn. Thank you so much for a beautiful read.

Aw, that was really sweet! :D Loved it!

this is so amazing, like seriously, i am so in love with this story right now..i dont even know. but anyways, this is awesome, and i love it forever. so yea... =)

Holy hot man-on-man action, Batman!

So, for the past few minutes, I've only been able to stare blankly at the computer screen and make less than coherent noises. Somewhere between a whine and a gurgle, if you must know.

This was a perfect balance of cute fluff, unrequited love angst, and the pure joy that is smut. So thank you. Very, very well-written, mind-meltingly hot one shot.

Your stories are simply amazing. Nothing compares to them. And I don't really know what else to say except that you must be some sort of fanfiction-writing, smut-and-yaoi-loving Godess!
Seriously. It should be a real title or something.

One of the best one-shots I've ever read. You didn't go careening into smut, but rather, you went slowly and let Axel & Roxas' relationship move smoothly from acquaintances, to friends, to lovers. It's just really... heart-wrenching. I loved it. <3

This is probably the best AkuRoku fic I have ever read. Actually, make that best romantic fic I've ever read. I have never read unrequited love portrayed quite so well as this before. Makes my heart ache in such a delicious way. <3 Amazing job.

Seriously, I think I cried a little. Great story!! Absolutely loved it!

OMG, YOU ARE LIKE SO MY NEW FAVOURITE WRITER! your characterisation was superb and even tho we never got around to figuring out why roxas' so sad in the beginning, the akuroku was heartwrenching and so so hot. and axel, axel's so cute in this it hurts (in a good way).

thanks :-)

that was so heartbreakingly beautiful. I love your work.

Naive Axel= KAWAII! =^^=

I really like the story! Compared to other stuff that I've read, you gradually went through the story, and the speed was worth it! I really liked the romanticism of the fic ^^

Aw. Uber cuteness at the end. ^.^