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| Gato-san 2004-04-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseDeep. That was really deep. I am in awe. Keep writing for you are good at it. |
| Urameshi 2002-01-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou write such great fics but I have one nitpick though... you don't give Kaoru enough credit! C'mon, Kenshin loves her but you have to insist on Kenshin living in the past. |
| gone indefinitely 2002-01-05 ch 1, | abusehitokiri gentatsu-dono! i like this fic a lot. it's very poignant and seems to be completely in character. i did notice that there were a few diction errors (wreck in the first paragraph and show in the second - should be wreak and shown, respectively), and i wish you would use more commas (although i admit that i'm something of a comma-freak). i saw a couple run-on sentences, too, but that's about it. everything else is well done, and i really appreciate the quality. write more, ne? if you don't, i'll never forgive you, de gozaru yo. xoxo tigerlily |
| Faunlyn 2002-01-04 ch 1, | abuseThe new Ova wrenched something in my heart, that it most definatly did |
| zosocrowe 2002-01-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh wow, that is so sad! Is it from the new OAV? I haven't seen them yet, probably won't for sometime, but this story is fantastic. You write Kenshin so well, capturing his feeling incredibaly! I expected as much though, your fics are always amazingly written and enjoyable! |