Excellent story. Thanks for writing it.

It was bittersweet, but nicely done - really captured a helplessness at the end. I especially liked this line, 'Watching her now he realized that it might have been the right thing for the world, but it could have been the wrong thing for her.' Good job.

Great job. The last part was just so sad.

Excellant. You really gave us a good look into Sarah's inner life.

WOW, this was good, when I originally saw this I figured it would be broken down into 5 chapters, but this was good too. It provides a great history of sarah walker, which I hope the show continues to explore w/ the chuck characters in season 3. The ending was bittersweet, b/c for all of us CHARAH shippers we were so close to have them in a real relationship and now all we know is that is will be complicated, gee thanks :) but with any great love story the obstacles that stand in their way are nothing that hopefully their love can't handle.

That was really good. My heart breaks for these two. Nothing worse than loving someone and not being able to be with them. The last chapter summed up S3 and Chara. Great job.