Good chapter! i enjoyed your story :)
you say that you're half french so i would ask you if you could help me in traducting my OS. it would be more a correction as i've already traducted it but my english is bad enought :)
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Hi! Sorry i haven't read your story a long ago but i catch my late :) i enjoyed this chapter and the way you make Edmund such a silly man :)

Reviewing chapters 8 and 9.

“MY WIFE,” HE BEGAN. “SHE COOKS A DECENT ENOUGH MEAL, AND MAYBE YOU CAN TALK ME INTO TAKING PART IN YOUR DEAL, I'VE GOT SOME SPARE MONEY LYING AROUND AND I'VE BEEN LOOKING FOR A SMART THING TO DO WITH IT. MAYBE IT'S MORE THAN A COINCIDENCE THAT YOU SAT ON THAT STOOL NEXT TO ME THIS EVENING, MAYBE WE WERE MEANT TO COLLABORATE TOGETHER.”

Her only value to him is to cook his food, boy, I so want Sawyer to steal all his money!

EDMUND BURST OUT LAUGHING, “AS IF JULIET WOULD EVER APPEAL AND ACTUALLY HAVE A SHOT WITH A GUY LIKE YOU. UNLESS YOU WERE SOME SORT OF SKINNY, NERDY AND AWKWARD GEEK BACK THEN TOO.”

This guy is a bastard, Sawyer needs to beat him up pretty badly!

THE SOUND OF A PHONE RINGING INTERRUPTED THE CLINKING SOUND OF THEIR FORKS AGAINST THEIR PLATES. IT WAS EDMUND'S CELL PHONE, AND HIS RING TONE WAS 'DARTH VADER'S IMPERIAL MARCH' FROM STAR WARS, OF COURSE IT WAS, HE IS JUST THAT OBNOXIOUS.

Hahaha, my work coleague ring tone is Darth Vader’s Imperail March, it’s so funny when that thing goes off.

THEY JUMPED APART WHEN THEY HEARD EDMUND BARGE BACK IN THE ROOM. EXCELLENT TIMING, JERK, SAWYER SAID TO HIMSELF.

Oh, if it wasn't for Edmund they would have kissed. Seriously, this guys needs to get beat up!

Yay for your first completed multi chapter fic! i really enjoyed it. it was so cute. I just loved it all.


So can we be hopong for an update to your other fic in the near future?? That was one of the first lost fics i read, and possibly my 1st post finale fic (or at least 1 of them) and i miss it!

So amazing! i was all shaky before juliet went to talk to him and all smiley when she walked out. its just all so great

i definitely enjoyed this little look into the mind of edmund burke :)

2 chapters left! I'm excited to see how you wrap it all up, but i don't want it to end!!

i loved their conversation at the end. gah, i'm almost done! i just can't stop reading this!!

Ah, its so amazing! another awesome chapter.

this is my favorite chapter so far. i loved getting the old juliet back for a bit. im so excited to see where you take this!!

also, are you planning on finishing your other fic?? i love that one too :)

this is so amazing!! i was not expecting that call from cassidy. okay, off to find out whats going to happen (i love catching up, no tortuous waits) :)

i really like Rachel's personality. this story is just so good, idon't know how i didn't start it earlier (although now i can just read the whole thing through, so i'm pretty happy :D )

I loved it!! you have them down perfectly, and their meeting for the 'first time' was just so cute.

Yay for you for finishing your first story! Congrats! I have to say that I am really kinda sad this is done as I love your writing and really enjoyed this story. I'm rather curious what the other twist you were thinking about was. I'm sure it would have been rather brilliant - this last chapter could have just been a dream (hahaha) :) Even so, I loved the sappy sweet ending too. I was surprised that they stopped the make out session and just decided to start over. I noticed that this sorta referred back to their first almost night together - he reaches the bra and she puts on the brakes! LOL I liked that she got herself together and he made a clean break from the conning. The movie bit was so cute too. Thanks so much for the great story - I'm looking forward to re-reading your other one and can't wait to read more great writing from you hopefully soon!

oh i love this. its an incredibly amazing start. i love the idea, and your writing is great. and yay, i have so many chapters to catch up on :)

Aw, that's the end? Epilogue? I did enjoy it, however; this story was lovely and I'm super glad you broke your curse! Thanks so much for sharing this with us! :) Hope everything is going well for you!