aw ok just send the title of the redoned one ^^

:D YAY I HOPE U POST THE NEW STORY UP SOON XD I CANT WAIT TO READ IT AU STORIES ARE AWESHUM

Oh I loved it! Please update soon! (It's really beautiful Ed's tailfin, really easy to imagine!)

That was a little rushed, but still cute! ^_^

Please don't take offence to this, but I got confused when you said the Edwin was both a male and female name, so I went looking for myself. Every single page I looked at said that it was only a boy's name, and I've got to say that I've never known a girl named Edwin. Sorry, again, please don't kill me.

Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter! :3

You know I think that it's the latest thing to get sick and write a chapter of you story XD i've done it twice lol hope you get better soon * yawns it's so late must pass out on bed <3 well till next time Ja Ne

lol thank you ^^ I'm glad I could help you if you need anymore just PM me XD so much drama O.o and I do beleive the koi fin is a nice touch can't wait to read the next chappy till next time Ja Ne

yeah it is a boy's name heheh i should know cause my teacher's name is edwin and he is the most ridiculus man i know when it comes to teaching

OMG! I just love this story! So sorry I haven't reviewed any of your chapters before... I don't review. This is my first review on ANYTHING so... xD PLZ KEEP ON WRITING IT and also would it be OK with you if I drew fanart for this fanfiction? =3

whahaha! XD
You know that there's a feminine variation to Edward in portuguese? It is spelled Eduarda and it is actually very popular although I don't personaly know any Eduarda (two Edwards though)

anyway!
This chapter was rushy but cute! I hate weddings too and I hate it more when ppl deem it necessary to describe weddings... so thank you! XD (I would have skipped the whole thing...) A little fluffy would be nice... I miss the fluffy u.u

bye!

oh! so cute! I loved your fic! It's not my usual but Iliked the change :)

I loved Roy's character, he's so cute o/ And you get my atention and give me amusement x)

I just think that Ed's tail shouldbe silvery, like male Ed's machine arm/leg, just a thought, :)

bye!

her tail sounds kinda like a koi fish (random)
anyway,wow. that was a really fast any easy process to change O.O suprised me
hope you update soon! ^^

i love it!! please update soon! keep up the good work!

i loved it :) please update soon!keep up the good work!

Aww...it's so cute! ^_^ Heh...you've been reading agent0's "Call of Atlantis" story, haven't you? You do know that Edwin is a boy's name, right? You could've given her a name like Edwina.

Anyway, please continue! I really like this story, cause it's so gosh darn cute!

nice chapter. ^^