MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE! :D

i hope you continue this story i did not expect it to be so good when i started reading it. The plot is very well done and i hope you do not let this story die.

I loved the beginning of this story, really loved it, in fact I searched all over to try and find it again - but I saw on your profile that this was now on your abandoned stories list... ah well, par for the course with free entertainment eh? Anyway, I wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed how smart Harry was at the beginning, how he planned everything out and got it all done. I do think you could have gotten more depth if you had flip-flopped between Harry/Hazel and the reactions back in the wizarding world of his disappearance, and then of course flip-flopping between how H was coping and what was happening with the DE's, and the school, and of course the Order... but as you are not continuing this I will sign off with a 'Thanks for sharing' and hope that you might find your muse again in the future.

Marns
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Well... this story is pretty decent so far. Except for the fact that the MASSIVE anachronisms kill me. Could you please try to avoid them? It gets really annoying. Is it that hard to not use internet and smartphones in a story?

Anyway, thank you for writing,
Beyogi

Well this is interesting. I wonder how his friends will react once Harry is gone. I really hope this isn't too bashy. Anyway, I guess I just have to continue reading.

Thank you for writing,
Beyogi

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Interesting start. I hope you continue it and look forward to seeing how it develops further. Please update soon.

Good story Will you finish it ?

poke, to remind you this exist, just in case you forgot.

this is nice and deserve more love.

I love the story so far. Please continue. )

YOU PASS!
FLAWLESS VICTORY! _

Araceil, I am both sorry for your loss (Gran) and happy that things are now going well for you. :)

If you would like some help I am available on facebook, here,, Gaia, DA, and Live Journal to not only bounce ideas off of.. but also role play scenes.. maybe create some omakes.. or chat. :)

If you would like, and may be in need of one, I may beta your stories too.

Hi, I'm wondering if Harry will eventually have kids. Cause at the rate the wizarding world is going their gonna die out in 4 generations. Please update soon!

I like how u just went and screwed the normal overly unrealistic (even with magic) path and made harry get a magical sex change. It's awesome to see logic applied in this way what with all these FICs with Gay Harry(which usually means mpreg& mass adoptions which result in bloodline extinction because the kids R also gay) those get overyly complicated and they tend to expect reader to fill in the holes themselves. Good job on the story! Ima fan!

this is great, i do hope you'll continue it.