lol when i read the summary i was all "wtf...?" but i actually liked this. and it was hilarious when axel came in and then phoenix...haha great job

For some reason I can imagine these two having the roughest, most aggressive sex. lols

This wasn't a bad read, but the only thing that bothered me was how quickly and strongly Larxene came onto Franziska in the very short time she was there (especially considering how she doesn't have a heart . Sorry for bringing that up...) Axel's reaction was pretty humorous though. P

Loved Axel's lines! And the ending was priceless!

Heh heh heh cool

Well, this is kind of weird, but I like it. Not sure why. You're a good writer.

Seriously hilarious!

That was great!

“Axel hon, I’m busy here.”

“I see that. And I’m totally willing to let you continue, because holy shit, that’s hot. But, sadly, they want your report.”

“Tell Mansex he can shove it.”

HA! Funny as hell.