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Eb17
2009-10-30 . chapter 1
Really good! please post another 1!
reviewer
2009-08-29 . chapter 1
blackwater 4ever
sm just made jacob imprint on nessie so bella could use him without feeling guilty that she doesn't love him
amazing one-shot
bsloths
2009-08-26 . chapter 1
*shiver* I have chills, seriously. That was so, so insanely good.

I really feel for both of them, and the whole imprint thing was a nice way to get Jacob over Bella, but it's really just a prison, for everyone. Jacob has to love Nessie. Nessie feels like she has to love him. And Leah gets screwed over, again. It's so unfair to ask a child to commit to their true love at such a young age - it makes perfect sense that Jacob would have an 'affair' with Leah, though I think Stephenie is all about waiting until marriage and only being with one person. But that doesn't matter for this fic, because it's beautiful, and I'm rambling, sorry. :)
MrsBlaCKwIfe
2009-08-23 . chapter 1
Aww I love it amazing !
:)
La Mariposa3795
2009-08-22 . chapter 1
wow...great job!
adriana
2009-08-21 . chapter 1
its AMAZING WAY btter than stephanie meyer's, really the best ending leah and jacob SHOULD be together, not that stupid nessie. LOVE YOUR STORY CONGRATS keep it up XD
Marissa Davis
2009-08-16 . chapter 1
aw omg i loved it! gosh i wish the real books had gone like this!! amazing job!
sparechange1224
2009-08-16 . chapter 1
This was simply beautiful. I never could figure out why Leah stayed in La Push to be tortured by Sam, Emily, and the Cullens. I wish she would have left to find herself, to find happiness. The ending was great because if imprinting was as strong as everybody claims Jacob is going to want to go back to Nessie eventually.
ZuXy.Q
2009-08-16 . chapter 1
beautiful. the i don't believe you line was a perfect ending in a bittersweet kind of way
FroggyJump
2009-08-16 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this even though end doesn't give a lot of hope for Leah and Jacob. I think that it's sad that Jacob loves each girl but can or will never choose. It's sad that Leah has already pictured it ending, but I love angst and you did well.

I liked your writing, so I'll go find any other Leah fics you have. Hopefully you have something longer tucked away.
Jacobleah
2009-08-16 . chapter 1
What a unique one shot ! I hate the fact the Cullens feel they own Jake. I'm hoping he stays with his decision & Leah !
Kei Kat Jones
2009-08-16 . chapter 1
OMG! That was so sweet! Leah only left it so that Jake would find her. I hope he does decide to stay with her. I think the simple fact that he even left in the first place to begin this search says there's more than just a physical attraction. Man, he really pissed Sam off with that comment about their relationship before he left. That was really good. I love Blackwater fics!
vividink
2009-08-15 . chapter 1
Bloody brilliant. I very much enjoyed that. I loved how you weaved the 'I don't believe you' lines into the story. Well done!
BLACKWATER4EVR
2009-08-15 . chapter 1
aw, that was cute. i love how leah only wanted jacob to find her.
Jada91
2009-08-15 . chapter 1
i liked this oneshot. he was the only one that knew where she went. :)
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