Hot and beautiful all wrapped up in a deliciously citrusy slice of lemon. Loved it!

great one shot totally hot!

Hot and sweet- Edward showing up at the end was priceless!

You know...I'm not a huge fan of femmeslash, but that was pretty hot. In fact, it was one of my favorites!

Absolutely love it! Everyone needs an Alice like that!

LOVED IT!

seriously amazing!

love it!

Well written, empathic, and hot, with an interesting story :)

I loved this O/S. It was perfect. It combined a real story, real emotions, and real love and affection. Well, that and a damned decent lemon!

The affection Alice has for Bella is really impressive. I can feel Bella's emotions in this and I felt so bad for her that she was as conflicted as she was. Any you can feel how much Alice adores her.

There are some o/s that don't aim to tell a story, but yours does. It's brilliant and the lemons they shared are truly amazing!

Thank you for writing this o/s!

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*fall down thud* Just.. wow. FREAKIN HOT!

Oh, i loved it and the ending was cool.

Wow, great chapter!

I enjoyed!