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DarkestMagician
2009-09-06 . chapter 2
A solid second chapter although Sasuke was a tiny bit out of character with his last dialogue, something to work on but nothing to stress over, You have a nice descriptive talent and write things about how they feel about the situation in a more indept way which makes it an interesting to read. However you feel as though you need to hold the hand of your readers a bit less, for example the 'friends from her school' part; You could have just said her friends from school. But really I'm just nit picking and it really shouldn't matter.

Anyway that's all I'm gona say and thank you for the nice chapter and I'll hope to see more.
TheGirlOfManyObsessions
2009-09-05 . chapter 2
Oh!! This is really interesting I love the idea!! Very creative! I did catch a few spelling errors and some other mistakes, but so far, other than that, this story was very good!

UPDATE ASAP!!

-TheGirlOfManyObsessions
Lingo10
2009-09-03 . chapter 2
o very nice idea of all dating ;] when will the sasuke & naruto date show up?
Michelle De Lamarliere
2009-09-03 . chapter 2
I can't wait for Sasuke and Naruto's date! :]
Good story, continue soon!
king-veil .
2009-09-03 . chapter 2
i like the whole plot but i know this whole thing is going to lead to diaster for them . somebody is going to end up falling in love with one another . sakura might end up falling in love with naruto and naruto might fall for sasuke hopefully .i'm ** they kissed. add soon .
thehuggycutie
2009-08-15 . chapter 1
oh i love it! Sasuke was really blunt though. i hope you keep writing! this could become a horrible mess or a brilliant plan cant wait to see which.
DarkestMagician
2009-08-15 . chapter 1
This certainly caught my attention. Its a very fresh Idea compared to the other fics I've read. Please continue I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
sasunaru4evar
2009-08-15 . chapter 1
Wow, this is so cool! This is now on my favorites list! Please continue to write more, PLEASE!
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