 DarkestMagician 2009-09-06 . chapter 2A solid second chapter although Sasuke was a tiny bit out of character with his last dialogue, something to work on but nothing to stress over, You have a nice descriptive talent and write things about how they feel about the situation in a more indept way which makes it an interesting to read. However you feel as though you need to hold the hand of your readers a bit less, for example the 'friends from her school' part; You could have just said her friends from school. But really I'm just nit picking and it really shouldn't matter.
Anyway that's all I'm gona say and thank you for the nice chapter and I'll hope to see more. |
 TheGirlOfManyObsessions 2009-09-05 . chapter 2Oh!! This is really interesting I love the idea!! Very creative! I did catch a few spelling errors and some other mistakes, but so far, other than that, this story was very good!
UPDATE ASAP!!
-TheGirlOfManyObsessions |
 Lingo10 2009-09-03 . chapter 2o very nice idea of all dating ;] when will the sasuke & naruto date show up? |
 Michelle De Lamarliere 2009-09-03 . chapter 2I can't wait for Sasuke and Naruto's date! :]
Good story, continue soon! |
 king-veil . 2009-09-03 . chapter 2i like the whole plot but i know this whole thing is going to lead to diaster for them . somebody is going to end up falling in love with one another . sakura might end up falling in love with naruto and naruto might fall for sasuke hopefully .i'm ** they kissed. add soon . |
 thehuggycutie 2009-08-15 . chapter 1oh i love it! Sasuke was really blunt though. i hope you keep writing! this could become a horrible mess or a brilliant plan cant wait to see which. |
 DarkestMagician 2009-08-15 . chapter 1This certainly caught my attention. Its a very fresh Idea compared to the other fics I've read. Please continue I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
 sasunaru4evar 2009-08-15 . chapter 1Wow, this is so cool! This is now on my favorites list! Please continue to write more, PLEASE! |