Oh my God! He's not dead, he is? How could you do a thing like that? First rule of laby fanfics is never kill Jareth! Oh my God, how could you? :o

*"I have only been what you've wanted me to be." He shot back. "If you had wanted a knight in shining armor, I would have granted your wish. But you wanted me to be evil and without mercy so that you could beat me and feel a sense of triumph."*

Just like with Sarah. He was a villain because she wanted him to be a villain, nothing more. He granted her her wish. *Triumphant smile* I'm glad someone else other than me can see that. And I'm very happy to see that someone else other than me don't actually see him as a monster.

oh... it's so good but damn those cliffhangers. Update soon. I cannot express that enough

WOW! please write more, son! (lol) but I'm not kidding, you should continue this!

KEEP WRITING

Rosie

like what I am reading so far...I will continue and you must continue to write, be it on this story or another

KEEP WRITING

Rosie

so far so good! I will continue to see how this goes!

keep writing

rose

Okay, now as much as I am loving Unexpected Consequences, you are gonna finish this one eventually, right? It's so cute!

ohhh i love it im suprised you dont have more reviews!

cya

AAAHH! What Happened? (considering that I have been sitting here for the past FOUR hours reading your stories, I feel I have a right to know! )

Really, this is an excellent story, and I am enjoying it and I REALLY want to know WHAT HAPPENED?

what did you do to jareht! uurrrrr! had it all going perfectly adn then ...something! aaaaarrrrrggggggghhhhh! you know that maybe why you can't write a short chapter, you always hve to complecate things, not that i'm complaining! i love it! encore! but don't you dare hurt my clone is very shocked!

Hey author! Are you going to update this, or am I going to have to sic Jareth on you? *Throws rotten, enchanted peaches*

Very nice.I wonder whats wrong with Jareth?used a little too much magic perhaps!

Hey! What gives 'yo? Are you people TRYING to drive me insane? Yup, that IT. It's either that or there is a bad case of the Evil Cliffhangers going around. Do continue my dear, it's quite nice.

What Happened To Jareth? You Can't Just Leave Me Hanging Like This! You Can't Do This To Me! I'm Going To DIE Of Lack Of Labyrinth Reading Material! Get The Next Chapter Up Soon! I'm Hanging Here! (**sings** Hanging by a moment here with you... No! Bad! **slaps herself out of it**) Faster! Write! I need to read more of this! It's so amazing! I need to know what happened to him! I need to know what knocked him out so that I can Permanently Exterminate it **evil grin** Hurry!

Damn little goblin! He Was SO CLOSE!